Question

假定英語(yǔ)課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯(cuò)誤涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。
增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏詞符號(hào)（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（／）劃掉。
修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線（­­___），并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。
注意：1.每處錯(cuò)誤及修改均僅限一詞;
2.只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分。
This morning on my way to school I was deep moved by what I saw outside a bank. An old man was counting his money in the front of the bank. Suddenly a young man came running and knocked him down. To make things bad, his money was lying in all direction. In no time the people around rush to pick the money up while the old man stood there, not know what to do. Surprisingly, everyone gave back the money they had just picked. The old man counted the money again and found that not a single bill was missed. To my great joy, there are now a lot of nice people in your life. It’s true what honesty is more important than money!     

Answer 1

【小題1】Deep-deeply
【小題2】in the front of去掉the
【小題3】bad-worse
【小題4】direction-directions
【小題5】rush-rushed
【小題6】know-knowing
【小題7】picked后面加up
【小題8】missed-missing
【小題9】your-our
【小題10】what-that

解析試題分析：文章介紹作者上學(xué)路上見到的讓他感動(dòng)的事情。一個(gè)老人的錢撒了一地，人們都幫助他撿起錢，結(jié)果一分不少。
【小題1】我被看見的事情深深的感動(dòng)了。修飾moved用副詞：Deep-deeply
【小題2】一個(gè)老人在銀行外面數(shù)錢，in the front of是在…前部，去掉the，in front of在…前面
【小題3】To make things worse“使事情更糟糕的是”
【小題4】他的錢朝四面八方灑去。In all directions朝四面八方
【小題5】很快，周圍的人都沖去撿錢。因?yàn)槭菙⑹鲞^(guò)去的事情，用一般過(guò)去式：rush-rushed
【小題6】老人站在那里，不知道怎么辦。用現(xiàn)在分詞做狀語(yǔ)：know-knowing
【小題7】大家 都?xì)w還了撿起來(lái)的錢，picked后面加up“撿起”
【小題8】老人一遍一遍的數(shù)錢，發(fā)現(xiàn)沒有少錢，形容詞missing 不見了
【小題9】在我們的生活中有很多的好人，物主代詞錯(cuò)了：your-our
【小題10】誠(chéng)實(shí)比金錢更重要這是對(duì)的。It is true that…，that引導(dǎo)主語(yǔ)從句。
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