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8．最近你校對學(xué)生的書寫情況進(jìn)行了調(diào)查，結(jié)果發(fā)現(xiàn)：隨著電腦的普及，學(xué)生們越來越不重視書寫（handwriting），其理由如圖所示．請根據(jù)調(diào)查表提供的信息寫一篇英語短文，介紹調(diào)查結(jié)果并發(fā)表自己的看法．
注意：詞數(shù)120左右，文章的開頭已給出（不計入總詞數(shù)）．

Nowadays，with the growing popularity of computers，
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Answer 1

分析 1．分析題干可知，作文時態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時，圍繞學(xué)生的書寫情況進(jìn)行描述．
2．短文第一段可引出話題：隨著電腦的普及，學(xué)生們越來越不重視書寫．
3．第二段描述一下調(diào)查結(jié)果即學(xué)生不重視書寫的理由有：51.5%的學(xué)生認(rèn)為可以用電腦寫字，32.3%的學(xué)生認(rèn)為沒有時間練，10.9%的學(xué)生認(rèn)為沒有什么用，5.3%的學(xué)生有其他的理由．
4．第三段發(fā)表一下自己的看法，只要表述合理即可．
5．適當(dāng)使用一些復(fù)合句和連接詞，使上下文連貫．
【亮點說明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達(dá)：pay attention to注意；According to 根據(jù)；be busy with忙于；As the saying goes正如諺語所說；especially 尤其；Therefore因此；in my opinion以我的觀點來看
 Nowadays，with the growing popularity of computers，more middle school students are paying less and less attention to handwriting．（高分句型一）
51.5 percent of the students think that they can just use a computer，so there is no need to waste time improving their handwriting and 32.3 percent believe that they are so busy with the study that they do not have time to practice．（高分句型二）
As the saying goes，writing style shows the man．Beautiful and neat handwriting is beneficial，especially for middle school students．（高分句型三）

解答 Nowadays，with the growing popularity of computers，more middle school students are paying less and less attention to handwriting．（高分句型一）（引出話題）
     According to a recent survey，many students don't want to improve their handwriting for various reasons.51.5 percent of the students think that they can just use a computer，so there is no need to waste time improving their handwriting and 32.3 percent believe that they are so busy with the study that they do not have time to practice．（高分句型二） 10.9 percent think that practising handwritng is useless．Yet the rest have other reasons．（學(xué)生不重視書寫的理由）
     As the saying goes，writing style shows the man．Beautiful and neat handwriting is beneficial，especially for middle school students．（高分句型三） Therefore，in my opinion，more emphasis should be placed on this aspect in future．（自己的看法）

點評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強(qiáng)的測試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過程中綜合運(yùn)用語言的能力．在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致，時態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．