Question

第二節(jié)：短文改錯(cuò)（共10小題；每小題1.5分，滿(mǎn)分15分）
假如英語(yǔ)課上老題要求同學(xué)們交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫(xiě)的以下作文。文中共有10處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，要求你在錯(cuò)誤的地方增加、刪除、或修改某個(gè)單詞。
增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)（/\），并在其下面寫(xiě)上該加的詞。
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（＼）劃掉。
修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫(xiě)上修改后的詞。
注意：1、每次錯(cuò)誤以及修改均限一詞；
2、只允許修改10處，多者從第十一處起不計(jì)分
I feel very happy to receive your letter and here I 'd like to give you some advices on how to leam English．Above all, don't lose your heart．
Many students find it hard to learnt English, especially to write good English compositions．In my opinion, if you want to improve your writing better, you should leam by heart so many English expressions and patterns as possible．And at the same time try to use it in your compositions．I think just remember grammar rules is no use. Only by reading and writing a lot can you be able to learn English well in effective way. I think what the most important thing is that you should keep writing every day and never give up.

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