假定英語(yǔ)課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫(xiě)的以下作文。文中共有10處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。增加:在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)(∧)，并在其下面寫(xiě)出該加的詞。刪除:把多余的詞用斜線(xiàn)(\)劃掉。修改:在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線(xiàn)，并在該詞下面寫(xiě)出修改后的詞。

注意:1.每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞;

2.只允許修改10處，多者(從第11處起)不計(jì)分。

Smile is a magic language that everyone can easily understand whenever he or she comes from. Smile is as the golden sunshine that brings warmth to people and makes him happy. Smile is shortest distance between people and it is a good way to show off friendliness to others. More important, smile conveyed a kind of positive energy to people. When you are happy, smile brightens your face. When you feel frustrating, you should also smile to cheer yourself up. Smile can give you confidences and make you strong. Smiling at the world and the world will smile back!

1.whenever→wherever

2.as→like

3.him→them

4.shortest前加the

5.去掉 off

6.important→importantly

7.conveyed→conveys

8.frustrating→frustrated

9.confidences→confidence

10.Smiling→Smile

【解析】

試題分析：微笑是最有魔力的語(yǔ)言，他能使世界各地的人相互理解，并且傳遞友情。更重要的是微笑對(duì)人們有著積極的作用。微笑的面對(duì)世界，世界也將會(huì)對(duì)你微笑。

1.wherever 考查連詞。這里指無(wú)論來(lái)自哪兒，用wherever。

2. 考查介詞。當(dāng)“像”講時(shí)，as作連接詞。她引導(dǎo)比較狀語(yǔ)從句和方式狀語(yǔ)從句，like作介詞，后面加名詞等作賓語(yǔ)。

3. 考查代詞。這里指代前面的people，用復(fù)數(shù)。

4. 考查冠詞。形容詞最高級(jí)前面用定冠詞the。

5. off 考查動(dòng)詞。show用作及物動(dòng)詞是指“顯示，說(shuō)明”，show off是“炫耀”的意思。

6. 考查形容詞。在句子中做狀語(yǔ)，用副詞形式。

7.conveys 考查時(shí)態(tài)�？v觀(guān)全文使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，所以此處應(yīng)該用conveys。

8. 考查非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞。分詞做定語(yǔ)時(shí)，-ed是用來(lái)形容人的感情，-ing是形容物體或事件的。

9. 考查名詞。confidence是抽象名詞，不可數(shù)。

10. 考查固定句型。這里考查句型“祈使句+and+陳述句”，所以用動(dòng)詞原形smile。

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