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20．隨著網(wǎng)絡(luò)的普及，越來越多的學(xué)生依賴網(wǎng)絡(luò)做作業(yè)．請你依據(jù)以下內(nèi)容寫一篇英語短文．
1．借助網(wǎng)絡(luò)做作業(yè)的優(yōu)點：省時；查詢答案方便等；
2．依賴網(wǎng)絡(luò)做作業(yè)的缺點：導(dǎo)致懶惰；養(yǎng)成不良學(xué)習(xí)習(xí)慣等；
3．你的建議．
注意：1．可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
2．詞數(shù)100 左右；
3．開頭已為你寫好，但不計入總詞數(shù)．
Nowadays，more and more students do their schoolwork with the help of the Internet．
                        

Answer 1

分析 （高分句型一） Firstly，with the click of a mouse，the students can get what they want from the Internet quickly，which saves them time on schoolwork．
句子里with表示伴隨狀語；which引導(dǎo)非限制性定語從句，修飾現(xiàn)行詞這件事情；
（高分句型二） it's convenient to search the Internet for answers．
該句型使用了It is convenient to do…做某事很方便；
（高分句型三）With no effort，some students copy online answers，resulting laziness and bad studying habits．
resulting in是現(xiàn)在分詞做狀語，表示結(jié)果；
高級詞匯：advantage優(yōu)點；convenient 方便的；disadvantage缺點；in a reasonable way合理的方式；
Generally speaking一般說來；However轉(zhuǎn)折；Worse still更糟糕的； In my opinion在我看來；

解答 Nowadays，more and more students do their schoolwork with the help of the Internet．（優(yōu)點）Generally speaking，its advantages can be seen as follows．（高分句型一） Firstly，with the click of a mouse，the students can get what they want from the Internet quickly，which saves them time on schoolwork．Secondly，if they find something difficult，（高分句型二） it's convenient to search the Internet for answers．
   （缺點）However，depending too much on the Internet may bring some disadvantages．（高分句型三）With no effort，some students copy online answers，resulting laziness and bad studying habits．Worse still，it may kill their creative thinking．
    In my opinion，（我的觀點）we may enjoy the convenience of the Internet，but turn to it for help when really necessary．In brief，we should use it in a reasonable way．

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