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3．請用英語寫一篇短文，介紹《時代》雜志2014年度人物"埃博拉斗士"．內(nèi)容如下：
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《時代》年度人物評選概況 方式：每年由《時代》雜志編輯們選出 標準：給新聞和人們生活帶來最大影響的個人或團體 2014年度人物情況 獲選者："埃博拉斗士" 宣布時間：2014年12月10日 獲選原因：護理人員為抗擊埃博拉病毒而努力工作，此病毒在西部非洲爆發(fā)，奪去數(shù)以千計患者的生命． 封面人物：兩名醫(yī)生，一名護士，一名救護車司機，一名衛(wèi)生保健工作者，共五人登上雜志封面．其中有： Salome Karwah，父母均死于埃博拉，她幸存下來，康復(fù)后照料其它病患者； Kent Brantly，美國醫(yī)生，在非洲醫(yī)治病人時染上埃博拉病毒，后康復(fù)

參考詞匯：埃博拉斗士      the Ebola fighters
《時代》年度人物 Time's Person of the Year
衛(wèi)生保健工作者 health care worker
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只能用5個句子表達全部內(nèi)容．
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句子結(jié)構(gòu)準確，信息內(nèi)容完整，篇章連貫．
Chosen by the magazine's editors each year，Time's Person of the Year isan individual or group of individuals who have had the greatest impact on newsor people's life that year．On December 10，the magazine named the Ebola fighters its 2014"Person of theYear"，applauding the work of those fighting Ebola in western Africa，where an outbreak of thevirus has killed thousands of people．Five people，including two doctors，a nurse，an ambulance driver and a health care worker were pictured onthe covers of the magazines．Among them are Ebola survivor Salome Karwah and Americandoctor Kent Brantly．The former，who lost both her parents to the disease，survived herself and began to care for other sufferers，and the latter becameinfected with Ebola while treating patients and later recovered from the virus．．

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分析 本文是一篇提綱作文．根據(jù)所提供的材料信息，介紹《時代》雜志2014年度人物"愛博拉斗士"相關(guān)情況，寫一篇短文．
寫作要點包括：1．《時代》年度人物評選概況：方式、標準；
             2.2014年度人物情況：獲選者、宣布時間、獲選原因、封面人物．時態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時和一般過去時為主．人稱以第三人稱為主．
重要短語：have the greatest impact on （對…有最大的影響），applaud the work（為這個工作喝彩），kill sb （奪取某人的生命），name sb sth（提名，任命某人為…），survive oneself （某人幸存下來），care for （關(guān)心），become infected with （被感染），recover from （從…恢復(fù)）．

【高分句型】
1．Chosen by the magazine's editors each year，Time's Person of the Year is an individual or group of individuals who have had the greatest impact on news or people's life that year．
這里是過去分詞chosen作狀語，主句主語Time's Person of the Year與動詞choose構(gòu)成邏輯上的被動關(guān)系．

2．the magazine ②named the"Ebola fighters its 2014"Person of the Year"，①applauding the work of those fighting Ebola in western Africa，③where an outbreak of the virus has killed thousands of people．
①這里是現(xiàn)在分詞applauding作伴隨狀語，主句的主語the magazine 與所給動詞applaud構(gòu)成邏輯上的主動關(guān)系．
②這里是過去分詞named作the magazine的后置定語，相當于定語從句the magazine which/that was named the"Ebola fighters its 2014"Person of the Year"．
③這里是where引導的非限制性定語從句，先行詞是western Africa，where在句子作地點狀語．

3．Among them are Ebola survivor Salome Karwah and American doctor Kent Brantly．
這里是介詞短語Among them置于句首，后面用完全倒裝．"介詞短語+謂語動詞+主語"．

解答 Chosen by the magazine's editors each year，Time's Person of the Year isan individual or group of individuals who have had the greatest impact on newsor people's life that year．【高分句型】（方式、標準） On December 10，the magazine named the Ebolafighters its 2014"Person of the Year"，（獲選者、宣布時間） applauding the work of those fighting Ebola in western Africa，where an outbreak of thevirus has killed thousands of people．【高分句型】（獲選原因） Five people，including two doctors，a nurse，an ambulance driver and ahealth care worker were pictured on the covers of the magazines．Among them are Ebolasurvivor Salome Karwah and American doctor Kent Brantly．【高分句型】The former，who lost both her parents to the disease，【高分句型】survived herself and beganto care for other sufferers，and the latter became infected with Ebola while treating patients and later recovered from the virus．（封面人物）

點評 提綱作文在寫作時要注意內(nèi)容是否包含了所有要點．寫作時注意準確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次，平時需注意積累短語和重要句型．