Question

【題目】假定你是李華，你的英國(guó)筆友David對(duì)中國(guó)傳統(tǒng)文化很感興趣，他想讓你給他推薦一本關(guān)于這方面的書。請(qǐng) 你給他回一封郵件,向他推薦我國(guó)的四大名著之---《西游記》。內(nèi)容包括：

1.《西游記》簡(jiǎn)介；

2.推薦理由。

注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；

2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

參考詞匯：徒弟 disciple,佛經(jīng) Buddhist scriptures

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Answer 1

【答案】Dear David,

I’m glad you’re interested in our traditional culture. I recommend Journey to the West first to you,

It tells the story of Tang Xuanzang and his three disciples who go to India for Buddhist scriptures. During their journey, they bravely face a series of dangers and finally conquer those devils and monsters. This book is not only interesting in content and vivid in language, but also conveys a spirit of courage. In our daily life, we are bound to meet with all kinds of challenges. We should be brave and never give up.

The book is well worth reading. I hope you will like it.

Your sincerely,

Li Hua

【解析】

本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文，要求考生寫一封郵件，,向英國(guó)筆友David推薦我國(guó)的四大名著之---《西游記》。

第一步：審題

體裁：應(yīng)用文

時(shí)態(tài)：根據(jù)提示，時(shí)態(tài)應(yīng)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。

要求：

1.《西游記》簡(jiǎn)介；

2.推薦理由。

第二步:列提綱 （重點(diǎn)詞組）

recommend；Journey to the West；disciple；face；a series of；conquer；convey；be bound to；challenge；be well worth doing

第三步：連詞成句

1.I recommend Journey to the West first to you,

2. It tells the story of Tang Xuanzang and his three disciples

3. They bravely face a series of dangers and finally conquer those devils and monsters.

4.It conveys a spirit of courage.

5.In our daily life, we are bound to meet with all kinds of challenges.

6. We should be brave and never give up.

7. The book is well worth reading.

根據(jù)提示及關(guān)鍵詞（組）進(jìn)行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時(shí)態(tài)問題。

第四步：連句成篇（銜接詞）

1.表文章結(jié)構(gòu)順序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last

2.表并列補(bǔ)充關(guān)系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,

3.表轉(zhuǎn)折對(duì)比關(guān)系：However, On the contrary, but, In spite of+n/doing, On the one hand…, on the other hand…, Some…,while others…, as for, so…that…

4.表因果關(guān)系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result

連句成文，注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞進(jìn)行句子之間的銜接與過渡，書寫一定要規(guī)范清晰，

第五步：潤(rùn)色修改

范文內(nèi)容完整，要點(diǎn)全面，語(yǔ)言規(guī)范，語(yǔ)篇連貫，詞數(shù)適當(dāng)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系。作者在范文中使用定語(yǔ)從句：who go to India for Buddhist scriptures.和由not only…but also…連接的并列句：This book is not only interesting in content and vivid in language, but also conveys a spirit of courage.還使用了一些固定詞組，如a series of；be bound to和be well worth reading等。全文中沒有中國(guó)式英語(yǔ)的句式，顯示了很高的駕馭英語(yǔ)的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、層次分明，上下句轉(zhuǎn)換自然，為文章增色添彩。