Question

進(jìn)入高一以來，同學(xué)們的學(xué)習(xí)壓力更大了。最近，你班同學(xué)針對怎樣過周末進(jìn)行了討論。請根據(jù)以下內(nèi)容，寫一篇英語短文，介紹同學(xué)們的不同觀點(diǎn)，并談?wù)勛约旱目捶ā?br />1.有些人認(rèn)為：周末聽該好好放松；2.有些人認(rèn)為：應(yīng)該利用周末好好學(xué)習(xí)； 3.你的看法。
注意：字?jǐn)?shù)100字左右。

Answer 1

Since we entered Grade three we students feel greater stress. Recently , we had a discussion about how we spend our weekends. We have different opinions.
Some of us say we should spend our weekends on our lessons because examination are more and more frequent. If we work hard at our lessons. We are expected to get good scores in the exams.
However, others argue that we should try to relax ourselves at weekends because we are tired after studying hard for a week. It is obvious that a good rest makes us feel refreshed.
As far as I am concerned , it is necessary for us to relax at weekends. But working on our lessons is equally important.

本文是議論文，關(guān)于怎么度過周末，有正反正兩種觀點(diǎn)，并注意談?wù)勛约旱目捶ㄅc建議。作文要點(diǎn)已經(jīng)給出分段分別論述所給的要點(diǎn)，注意作文的連貫性，做到自然流暢。最好用第一人稱處一般現(xiàn)在時來寫。注意選擇自己熟悉的短語或者句型，在自己能力范圍內(nèi)，選擇的句式要賦予變化，并選擇適當(dāng)?shù)倪B接詞，把各個要點(diǎn)組織連接起來組成一個整體。
【亮點(diǎn)說明】范文中使用了很多高級短語，如 spend …on 花費(fèi)時間在某事上study hard 努力學(xué)習(xí)，be expected to 期望著做某事， as far as one be concerned 就某人而言，使作文嶺充實(shí)而不單調(diào)。范文中還運(yùn)用較多的語法知識 像賓語從句we had a discussion about how we spend our weekends，it is adj for sb to do . ，，句型等，語法知識掌握牢固。同時范文還注意使用連接詞如 however ,but 等。再表示觀點(diǎn)時用 some  ….others …. 的表達(dá)結(jié)構(gòu),使觀點(diǎn)對立明顯，層次分明。還運(yùn)用了些高級詞匯如recently , examination,score,argue , concerned,equally , important。最后的總結(jié)部分用But working on our lessons is equally important.動名詞做主語，豐富句子的類型。