Question

短文改錯 (共10小題;每小題1分,滿分10分)
英語課上，老師要求同桌同學(xué)相互修改作文。假設(shè)以下短文為你同桌所寫，請你對其進(jìn)行修改。文中共有10處錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯誤涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。
增加：在缺詞處加一個漏詞符號（/\），并在此符號下面寫出該加的詞。
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉。
修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。
注意：1．每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；
2．只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分。
Last Sunday I saw a worst storm in years. It came sudden and went on for over three hours. After lunch, I went into my room to have a rest. The air was hotter, and all is quiet. Then a strong wind started to blow into my room. Pieces of paper on my desk flew high into the air and some flew out the open window. As I ran out to catch them, big drop of rain began to fall. When I came back into house, it was raining harder and harder. I tried very hard to close the window. Then I heard a loudly crashing(碰撞的)sound from the back of the house. When I ran out of my room to find out what had happened: a big tree had fallen down and broke the top of the backroom.  

Answer 1

Last Sunday I saw a worst storm in years. It came sudden and went on for
the                      suddenly
over three hours. After lunch, I went into my room to have a rest. The air
was hotter, and all is quiet. Then a strong wind started to blow into my
hot       was
room. Pieces of paper on my desk flew high into the air and some flew out
∧the open window. As I ran outto catch them, big drop of rain began to
of                                           drops            
fall. When I came back into ∧ house, it was raining harder and harder. I tried
my
very hard to close the window. Then I heard a loudly crashingsound from
loud
the back of the house. When I ran out of my room to find out what had happened:
a big tree had fallen down and broke the top of the backroom.
broken                        

解析有具體的語言環(huán)境可知形容詞的最高級worst前的修飾詞，必須是the；
從文中的it came 可知需要副詞來修飾動詞came，所以sudden改為suddenly；
主要測試具體語境，此處沒有比較的意思，也沒有相比的對象，形容詞的比較級hotter改為hot；主要測試全篇文章的時(shí)態(tài)一致性：一般過去時(shí)；主要測試介詞后方可接賓語；
從句子Pieces of paper on my desk flew high into the air以及and 也可看出此處需要介詞，方可后接the open window；
主要測試具體的語境理解：我跑出去撿紙，這時(shí)天開始下雨；
從文中的句子：When I came back into house可知，可數(shù)名詞house 的前面需要限定詞修飾。另外注意代詞的一致性；主要測試名詞前面的修飾語：形容詞。修飾名詞的時(shí)候只能用形容詞；
由文章可知句子：When I ran out of my room to find out what had happened:屬于單句，根本不需要連詞，故此我很多余；
主要考查句子：a big tree had fallen down and broke the top of the backroom關(guān)鍵詞的把握。注意句子中的并列連詞：and，其前后的成分屬于相同的。