Question

【題目】 書面表達

假如你是高三學生李華，期末獲評年級“進步之星”。你校英語俱樂部邀請你做一個勵志的英語演講。請寫一篇標題為：“Time And Tide Wait For No Man” (機不可失，時不再來)的演講詞，內容須包括:

1.你對該格言的理解感悟;

2.體現(xiàn)該格言含義的個人經歷;

3.表達對其他同學的希望。

注意：

1. 詞數(shù)100字左右；

2. 可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫；

3. 演講稿開頭和結尾已為你寫好，不計入總詞數(shù);

4. 參考詞匯：進步之星：“Star of Progress”

Dear fellow students,

It's my great honor to be invited here to give a speech. The topic of my speech today is “Time and tide wait for no man”.

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That’s all.Thank you!

Answer 1

【答案】

one possible version

Dear fellow students,

It's my great honor to be invited here to give a speech. The topic of my speech today is “Time and tide wait for no man”.

In my understanding, the proverb means that if we allow the invaluable time to waste, it never comes back to you. As a Senior Three student, time is limited for study, so none can afford to waste time.

I still remember I slipped away the golden time in playing two years ago, as a consequence of which I fell far behind others. Realizing that opportunity seldom knocks twice, I seized every moment to study. Gradually I made great progress and was awarded the honorable title of “Star of Progress”.

Dear fellows, with Gaokao drawing near, we should not be content with what we have done. Value your time from now on and it will bring you benefits.

That’s all.Thank you!

【解析】

試題分析：本篇書面表達屬于提綱作文，根據(jù)提示寫一篇演講稿。寫作時注意以下幾點：1、仔細閱讀有關提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，明確要點就是主要內容。2、提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內進行分析、構思和想象，按照一定邏輯關系來寫。本文寫作時可以按照提示的三個方面（1.你對該格言的理解感悟;2.體現(xiàn)該格言含義的個人經歷;3.表達對其他同學的希望。）的內容進行介紹。3、根據(jù)要表達的內容確定句子的時態(tài)、語態(tài)；就本文而言應該主要用一般現(xiàn)在和過去時，人稱為第一人稱。4.注意使用高級詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點。

【亮點說明】本文結構緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種句式和結構。比如Realizing that…，which 引導的賓語從句，復合結構with Gaokao drawing near。此外還有短語afford to、made great progress和be content with等的使用。連詞as，and，so 使文章內容更具有層次感，也使語言更加連貫。