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12．【作文題目】假如你是九校中學(xué)高二學(xué)生李華，請(qǐng)給你的朋友Charles寫(xiě)一封信，告訴他你即將參加學(xué)校英語(yǔ)聽(tīng)力競(jìng)賽（English listening contest），內(nèi)容包括：
　　1．競(jìng)賽時(shí)間；
　　2．你此時(shí)的心情；
　　3．你的希望（成績(jī)，所得）．
注意：
　　1．詞數(shù)120左右；
　　2．可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
　　3．開(kāi)頭和結(jié)束語(yǔ)已為你寫(xiě)好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．
Dear Charles，
　　How are you these days？________________________________________________________________________________
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本篇書(shū)面表達(dá)屬于提綱類(lèi)作文，根據(jù)提示信息給你的朋友Charles寫(xiě)一封信，告訴他你即將參加學(xué)校英語(yǔ)聽(tīng)力競(jìng)賽（English listening contest），寫(xiě)作時(shí)注意以下幾點(diǎn)：1、仔細(xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，明確幾個(gè)要點(diǎn)：競(jìng)賽時(shí)間；你此時(shí)的心情；你的希望（成績(jī)，所得）． 2、提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進(jìn)行分析、構(gòu)思和想象．要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語(yǔ)，按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來(lái)寫(xiě)．本文寫(xiě)作時(shí)可以按照要點(diǎn)所給的順序?qū)懀?、根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定句子的時(shí)態(tài)、語(yǔ)態(tài)；4．注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點(diǎn)．
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達(dá)：As we all know眾所周知；on behalf of代表；To be honest誠(chéng)實(shí)的說(shuō)；At the same time同時(shí)；not only，but also不僅，而且；
As we all know，listening is very important for a student who is learning a language．（高分句型一）
It is for the reason that our school is to hold an English listening contest next Friday to improve our listening skills．（高分句型二）
What makes me happy is that I have been chosen on behalf of our class．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear Charles，
      How are you these days？I am writing this letter to tell you something about a contest in our school．
　　As we all know，listening is very important for a student who is learning a language．（高分句型一）It is for the reason that our school is to hold an English listening contest next Friday to improve our listening skills．（高分句型二）What makes me happy is that I have been chosen on behalf of our class．（高分句型三）
　　To be honest，I do feel nervous more or less，fearing that I can't get a satisfying prize and that I will let my classmates down．At the same time，I am quite excited，because only by challenging ourselves from time to time can we make progress all around．I hope I can make it，not only bringing honor to our class but also improving myself．（高分句型四） God bless me．
　　I believe you will give me your best wishes though you are not around，won't you？
　　Best wishes，
                                                                                                                                                                                                     Yours，
                                                                                                                                                                                                      Li Hua

點(diǎn)評(píng) 英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作是一項(xiàng)主觀性較強(qiáng)的測(cè)試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫(xiě)作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫(xiě)作過(guò)程中綜合運(yùn)用語(yǔ)言的能力．在撰寫(xiě)時(shí)要注意主謂語(yǔ)一致，時(shí)態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語(yǔ)言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實(shí)的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識(shí)造出正確無(wú)誤的句子；二是寫(xiě)作知識(shí)和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫(xiě)作方面的基本方法和技巧．