Question

12．【作文題目】假如你是九校中學(xué)高二學(xué)生李華，請給你的朋友Charles寫一封信，告訴他你即將參加學(xué)校英語聽力競賽（English listening contest），內(nèi)容包括：
　　1．競賽時間；
　　2．你此時的心情；
　　3．你的希望（成績，所得）．
注意：
　　1．詞數(shù)120左右；
　　2．可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
　　3．開頭和結(jié)束語已為你寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)．
Dear Charles，
　　How are you these days？________________________________________________________________________________
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本篇書面表達(dá)屬于提綱類作文，根據(jù)提示信息給你的朋友Charles寫一封信，告訴他你即將參加學(xué)校英語聽力競賽（English listening contest），寫作時注意以下幾點：1、仔細(xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，明確幾個要點：競賽時間；你此時的心情；你的希望（成績，所得）． 2、提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進(jìn)行分析、構(gòu)思和想象．要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語，按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來寫．本文寫作時可以按照要點所給的順序?qū)懀?、根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定句子的時態(tài)、語態(tài)；4．注意使用高級詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點．
【亮點說明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達(dá)：As we all know眾所周知；on behalf of代表；To be honest誠實的說；At the same time同時；not only，but also不僅，而且；
As we all know，listening is very important for a student who is learning a language．（高分句型一）
It is for the reason that our school is to hold an English listening contest next Friday to improve our listening skills．（高分句型二）
What makes me happy is that I have been chosen on behalf of our class．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear Charles，
      How are you these days？I am writing this letter to tell you something about a contest in our school．
　　As we all know，listening is very important for a student who is learning a language．（高分句型一）It is for the reason that our school is to hold an English listening contest next Friday to improve our listening skills．（高分句型二）What makes me happy is that I have been chosen on behalf of our class．（高分句型三）
　　To be honest，I do feel nervous more or less，fearing that I can't get a satisfying prize and that I will let my classmates down．At the same time，I am quite excited，because only by challenging ourselves from time to time can we make progress all around．I hope I can make it，not only bringing honor to our class but also improving myself．（高分句型四） God bless me．
　　I believe you will give me your best wishes though you are not around，won't you？
　　Best wishes，
                                                                                                                                                                                                     Yours，
                                                                                                                                                                                                      Li Hua

點評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強(qiáng)的測試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過程中綜合運用語言的能力．在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致，時態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．