Question

1．假如你是李華，你的美國中學(xué)生網(wǎng)友（ Nick）來信詢問你春節(jié)期間在家鄉(xiāng)當(dāng)導(dǎo)游的打工經(jīng)歷．請你用英語給他寫一封電子郵件，內(nèi)容包括：
1．當(dāng)?shù)芈糜钨Y源優(yōu)勢；2．你的優(yōu)勢條件及收獲；3．分享風(fēng)景照片．
注意：1．詞數(shù)100左右；2．可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；3．結(jié)束語已為你寫好．
Dear Nick，
                                      
Best wishes!
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 第一部分要直接表達(dá)很樂意收到朋友的來信并且愿意介紹自己在春節(jié)期間在家鄉(xiāng)當(dāng)導(dǎo)游的經(jīng)歷．其次述說整個過程，首先指出自己的家鄉(xiāng)比較受歡迎的點在哪里，在寒暑假總能吸引很多的人來度假．然后說明自己在導(dǎo)游上具備怎樣的優(yōu)勢，比如對旅游景點很熟悉并且語言表達(dá)能力強，與外地人溝通沒有問題．最后要說出自己當(dāng)導(dǎo)游的收獲，對這次經(jīng)歷做出總結(jié)．在書信的結(jié)尾要注明愿意分享幾張家鄉(xiāng)的照片給朋友．
【亮點說明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達(dá)：be glad to do sth．高興做某事；during the Spring Festival 在春節(jié)期間；be known for 因為??????而出名；do well in doing sth．在??????做得好；gain???from 從??????中獲得
My hometown is known for many national tourist attractions，which attract a large number of tourists，especially in holidays．（高分句型一）
I'm an expert about those places and I always do well in communicating with people from different places．（高分句型二）
 With this e-mail，I'd like to share with you several pictures of the scenery in my hometown．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear Nick，
      I'm glad to receive your letter asking me about my experience as a guide during the Spring Festival．I worked as a guide during the Spring Festival in my hometown．My hometown is known for many national tourist attractions，which attract a large number of tourists，especially in holidays．（高分句型一）I'm an expert about those places and I always do well in communicating with people from different places．（高分句型二）I gained much experience as well as some money from it．In short，I think it's a job worth doing．
      With this e-mail，I'd like to share with you several pictures of the scenery in my hometown．（高分句型三）I'm sure you'll like them very much!（111 words）
      Best wishes!
                                                                                                                                                                                       Yours sincerely，
                                                                                                                                                                                             Li Hua

點評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強的測試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過程中綜合運用語言的能力．在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致，時態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．