Question

增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（∧），在其下面寫上該加的詞。
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉。
修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫上修改后的詞。
注意:  1. 每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；
2. 只允許修改10處，多者（從11處起）不記分。
My neighbor Li Hai is going to graduate college soon and he hasn’t found the job yet. He was once advising to learn computer skills, so he thought it was difficult. When he saw others learning English, he shook his head, says it was too hard to remember new words. He enjoyed watching TV, playing cards, smoke and so on. He felt it was hard for him to give away all these habits. Not long ago, he went to look for a job. When he knew talents were great needed, he sighed and regretted the time that what he had wasted. He told me how he wished he has worked hard in college and asked me not to copy his example.

Answer 1

小題1:graduate 后面加from
小題2:the改成 a
小題3:advising改成 advised
小題4:so 改成but
小題5:says 改成saying
小題6:smoke改成smoking
小題7:away改成up
小題8:great 改成greatly
小題9:去掉what
小題10:has改成 had

試題分析：我的鄰居李海要大學畢業(yè)了，但是還沒有找到一個工作。因為他有很多壞習慣，也不肯學習技術，當他因為沒有才能找不到工作的時候，才后悔。
小題1:我的鄰居李海要大學畢業(yè)了，graduate from “從…中畢業(yè)”
小題2:但是還沒有找到一個工作。泛指“一份工作”，the改成 a
小題3:他被建議學習電腦科技。使用被動語態(tài)：advising改成 advised
小題4:他被建議學習電腦科技，但是他覺得很難。so 改成but
小題5:他搖搖頭，說記單詞太難了。says 改成saying，是做伴隨狀語
小題6:和watching TV, playing cards并列用動名詞, smoke改成smoking
小題7:他覺得很難戒掉所有的壞習慣。Give away贈送，泄漏，改成give up放棄，戒掉
小題8:當他知道才能很重要的時候。用副詞greatly修飾needed。
小題9:他后悔浪費掉的時間。這是定語從句，用that引導就可以
小題10:他告訴我他多么希望在大學的時候努力學習啊。Wish后面的從句用虛擬語氣，用相應的過去時表示虛擬，因為是說的上大學的事情，用過去完成時：has改成 had