Question

【題目】書面表達(dá)

你校�？瘜⒁�征集有關(guān)愛護(hù)學(xué)校校園環(huán)境的英文稿件，請結(jié)合自身實際，根據(jù)以下提示向其投稿。

1. 愛護(hù)校園環(huán)境的必要性。

2. 你校學(xué)生在愛護(hù)校園環(huán)境方面存在的問題。（兩點）

3. 就愛護(hù)校園環(huán)境提出建議。（兩點）

注意：

1. 字?jǐn)?shù)100左右，文章開頭已寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)；

2. 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；

3. 文中不得透露個人姓名和學(xué)校名稱。

As we all know, it is necessary for all of us students to protect our campus environment.

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Answer 1

【答案】

As we all know, it is necessary for all of us students to protect our campus environment. The campus is where we live and study, so we have the responsibility to protect our campus environment.

However, there exist some problems about the campus environment protection among some schoolmates. Some of them throw rubbish here and there, making our campus dirty and untidy. What’s worse, some students pick the flowers, even break the young trees.

Concerning how to protect our campus environment, I have some suggestions as follows: Above all, we can call on all the schoolmates to form the good habit of not throwing rubbish everywhere but putting different rubbish into different dustbins. Also, some proper measures should be taken to fight against the behavior of destroying our campus environment.

【解析】

試題分析：本文對考生的要求較高，要求考生首先讀懂原文，再根據(jù)文字提示寫作。寫信的要點都隱含在信中，再讀懂文章的基礎(chǔ)上，要考生自己歸納出來，再一一進(jìn)行解決，考生需要使用合適的連接詞把這些要點連接成文

【亮點說明】范文中運用一些常見的短語have the responsibility to有責(zé)任做某事；What’s worse更糟糕的是；Above all首先；The campus is where we live and study, so we have the responsibility to protect our campus environment這個句子where引導(dǎo)表語從句；Some of them throw rubbish here and there, making our campus dirty and untidy.這個句子making做伴隨狀語；