【題目】短文改錯

假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉。

修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1.每處錯誤及其修改均限一詞。

2.只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。

Dear Diary,

Here I am in the middle of a city, 350 miles far away from our farmhouse. Do you want to know why we move last week? Dad lost his job, and as Mom explained, “ He was lucky to find other one.” His new job meant I had to say goodbye to my classmate , my school or just everything else I love in the world. To make matters bad, now I have to share a room with my younger sister, Maggie. Tomorrow is first day of school. I am awfully tiring, but I know I will never fall sleep.

Good night and remember, you, dear diary, is my only souvenir from my past life and my only friend.

Yours,

Rosemary

【答案】

【1】Here →去掉Here

【2】move→moved

【3】other→another

【4】classmate→classmates

【5】or→and

【6】bad→worse

【7】 is∧ first day→the / my

【8】tiring→tired

【9】sleep→asleep

【10】is→are

【解析】

【1】Here →去掉Here 考查副詞。我住在市中心，離我的農(nóng)場350英里的地方。這里不需要here的詞義，故去掉Here。

【2】move→moved 考查動詞。根據(jù)時間狀語last week可知謂語動詞應該用過去式moved

【3】other→another 考查代詞。他有幸又找到了另一份工作。other其他的；another另一個,可以指不確定數(shù)量中的另一個。

【4】classmate→classmates 考查名詞。他有了新工作意味著我不得不向我的同學、學校和我以前的生活說聲再見。因為我的同學不是一個，所以必須用復數(shù)classmates

【5】or→and 考查連詞。or表示選擇；and表示并列。他有了新工作意味著我不得不向我的同學、學校和我以前的生活說聲再見

【6】bad→worse 考查固定短語。bad是原級； to make matters worse令事情更糟糕的是；是固定短語

【7】 is∧ first day→the / my考查序數(shù)詞。明天是我上學的第一天。First前可以用形容詞性物主代詞，根據(jù)上文可知用my，或者序數(shù)詞前常與定冠詞連用。

【8】tiring→tired 考查形容詞。tiring令人厭倦的；tired指人感到厭倦的，累的。這里的主語是I,所以應該用tired。

【9】sleep→asleep 考查固定短語。我知道我睡不著。這里是fall asleep入睡，睡著

【10】is→are 考查動詞。remember后是賓語從句，you是主語，dear Diary是you的同位語，所以謂語動詞用are。

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