Question

Dear Mr White,
I am writing tell you a piece of good news. Last week our school hold a Spoken English Competition. I stood out in the competition and won a first place. In my view, it is your kind help which has helped me gain the achievement. During your spare time, you often spent such much time helping me with your spoken English that I made rapid progress. In the competition, I followed your advices on how to behave, which led to my success. I’m grateful to you for your help and decide that I will make up more efforts and try to make great progress in the future.
I’m looking forward to hear from you soon.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua

Answer 1

小題1:writing后加to
小題2:hold改為held
小題3:a 改為the
小題4:which改為that
小題5:such 改為so
小題6:your 改為my
小題7:advices改為advice
小題8:去掉up
小題9:great改為greater
小題10:hear改為hearing

試題分析：
小題1:write to是固定用法，意思是給某人寫信。
小題2:過去發(fā)生的事情，故用一般過去時。
小題3:這里是特指，故用定冠詞“the”。
小題4:這里含有一個強調(diào)句，所以which改為that。
小題5:修飾副詞much，用so。
小題6:句意：在你的業(yè)余時間，你經(jīng)�；ê芏鄷r間幫助我提高我的英語口語。所以your 改為my。
小題7:advice是不可數(shù)名詞，所以advices改為advice 。
小題8:make efforts是固定用法，意思是作出努力。
小題9:前面make more efforts用的比較級，所以這里也要用比較級。
小題10:looking forward to是固定用法，意思是期待、期盼，后面接動詞-ing形式。