Question

11．假如你的網(wǎng)友John即將外出旅行，請你根據(jù)以下提示，用英語給他寫封電子郵件，向他介紹你對旅游的看法并提醒他旅行注意事項．
1．旅游是一種非常好的活動．當你累了或有空的時候，到外地走走．欣賞美景，呼吸新鮮空氣，交朋友，放松身心，忘記疲勞，有益健康．
2．旅行前的準備．了解天氣，帶好衣服、相機、常用藥品等．
3．旅行時注意飲食衛(wèi)生和安全，防止小偷．
要求：1、行文連貫，不得逐句翻譯；
2、詞數(shù)：100詞左右
Dear John，
I am glad to hear that you are going to travel．Now I'd like to share my view on traveling with you．
                                                         
Yours．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇關(guān)于旅游話題的電子郵件．光棍節(jié)題目要求可知用第一人稱和一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)．內(nèi)容包括：一點明寫信目的；二旅游活動的好處；三旅行前的準備以及旅行時應(yīng)該注意的問題；四表達祝愿．
高分句型：
1．Only by relaxing yourself will you forget your tiredness and build your health．句子里Only 引導(dǎo)狀語by relaxing yourself 位于句首，主句用倒裝will you forget．
只有放松身心，你才能忘記疲勞，恢復(fù)健康．
2．On your journey，you must pay attention to what you eat．句子里what you eat是賓語從句，表示"你吃的東西"．
在你的旅途中，要注意飲食衛(wèi)生．

解答 Dear John，
    I am glad to hear that you are going to travel．Now I'd like to share my view on traveling with you．（點明寫信目的）
   In my opinion，traveling is a very good activity．When you get tired with your work or study and when you have free time，you can go out to enjoy the beauty of nature．You can breathe the fresh air，meet different people and make friends with them．Only by relaxing yourself will you forget your tiredness and build your health．【高分句型一】（旅游活動的好處）
   In order to have a pleasant journey，you need to make full preparations ahead of time．You'd better have clear information about the weather，and bring proper clothes，a camera，some medicine for common injuries or diseases and so on．On your journey，you must pay attention to what you eat．【高分句型二】Be careful with everything everywhere in case your money gets stolen．（旅行前的準備以及旅行時應(yīng)該注意的問題）
    Do you agree with me？Wish you a good journey．（表達祝愿）
                                                      Yours，
 Linda

點評 考查提綱類作文．
提綱類作文一般給的要點比較多，這就要求在寫作時不能有遺漏，無論是漢語要點還是英語要點都要在作文中體現(xiàn)出來，這些提示也是閱卷時的要點．如果題目要求有自我發(fā)揮的內(nèi)容，也要寫出來．