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15．假如你叫李華，最近你的美國筆友Tony要來北京體驗中國傳統(tǒng)文化，請根據(jù)他的問題回復(fù)郵件，為他設(shè)計北京一日游活動，幫助他體驗中國傳統(tǒng)文化．請描述你們打算去的地方、具體的活動安排、以及這樣安排的理由．

Hi!Tony，
I'm glad that you will come to Beijing soon．There are lots of places of interest in Beijing【高分句型一】．In order to experience traditional Chinese culture better，I do recommend BeijingHutong tour．
First，we're going to go sightseeing along the lanes in Hutong．The houses in Hutong are traditional，such as Siheyuan．From them，you can imagine how people used to live．Of course you can stop anywhere you like and it is interesting to take pictures or have a close look．Second，we are going to pay visits to a Hutong family．We can have lunch there and have a short talk with the local residents，which can help you learn about many stories of the past．We can not only appreciate the dramaticchanges that Hutong has undergone，but also see evidence of the history of Beijing，experience the old way of life and experience traditional Beijing culture．
In a word，Hutongs are the homes of common people in the past．It is easy to know how people lived and had fun in the old days【高分句型二】．So it is a good choice to learn about traditional Chinese culture．
I'm looking forward to your coming．
Yours，
Li Hua．

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分析 本次作文為提綱類作文，要求根據(jù)Tony的問題回復(fù)郵件，為他設(shè)計北京一日游活動，幫助他體驗中國傳統(tǒng)文化．請描述你們打算去的地方、具體的活動安排、以及這樣安排的理由．寫作提綱已經(jīng)列出，要求明確，故要完成寫作任務(wù)，務(wù)必把各提綱所要求的內(nèi)容表達(dá)清楚．
【高分句型一】There are lots of places of interest in Beijing．北京有許多名勝古跡．place of interest 名勝古跡
【高分句型二】It is easy to know how people lived and had fun in the old days．很容易了解過去人們是如何生活并開心度日的．句式：It's+形容詞+to do sth．做某事…

解答 Hi，Tony!
        I'm glad that you will come to Beijing soon． There are lots of places of interest in Beijing【高分句型一】．In order to experience traditional Chinese culture better，I do recommend BeijingHutong tour．
       First，we're going to go sightseeing along the lanes in Hutong．The houses in Hutong are traditional，such as Siheyuan．From them，you can imagine how people used to live．Of course you can stop anywhere you like and it is interesting to take pictures or have a close look．Second，we are going to pay visits to a Hutong family．We can have lunch there and have a short talk with the local residents，which can help you learn about many stories of the past．We can not only appreciate the dramaticchanges that Hutong has undergone，but also see evidence of the history of Beijing，experience the old way of life and experience traditional Beijing culture．
       In a word，Hutongs are the homes of common people in the past．It is easy to know how people lived and had fun in the old days【高分句型二】．So it is a good choice to learn about traditional Chinese culture．
       I'm looking forward to your coming．
                                                                                                                                                                                                         Yours，
                                                                                                                                                                                                         Li Hua

點(diǎn)評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強(qiáng)的測試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過程中綜合運(yùn)用語言的能力．在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致，時態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實(shí)的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．