Question

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短文改錯(cuò)

　　此題要求改正所給短文中的錯(cuò)誤。對(duì)標(biāo)有題號(hào)的每一行作出判斷：如無錯(cuò)誤，在該行右邊橫線上畫一個(gè)勾（√）；如有錯(cuò)誤（每行只有一個(gè)錯(cuò)誤），則按下列情況改正：

　　該行多一個(gè)詞：把多余的詞用斜線（/）劃掉，在該行右邊橫線上寫出該詞，并也用斜線劃掉。

　　該行缺一個(gè)詞：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)（∧），在該行右邊橫線上寫出該加的詞。

　　該行錯(cuò)一個(gè)詞：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，在該行右邊橫線上寫出改正后的詞。

　　注意：原行沒有錯(cuò)誤的不要改。

　　Jane was very beautiful young girl, so she was quite

1．________

used to some men show their admiration for her and

2．________

others being shy when they saw her. A summer, when

3．________

Jane was travelling abroad, and she went into a cafe

4．________

in a small town, sat down and waited to be served. The

5．________

young waiter was talking to anyone at the bar when

6．________

she came in, and at first he was not paid any attention

7．________

to her, because he has not looked at her properly. Then

8．________

he turned round end saw how beautiful it was. His face

9．________

went brightly red, and he hurried over to take her order.

10．________

Answer 1

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解析：

1．very前加a　　導(dǎo)解：單數(shù)名詞girl前要加冠詞，此處指“一個(gè)女孩”。 　　2．show→showing　　導(dǎo)解：動(dòng)名詞的復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)作介詞賓語，“她習(xí)慣了他們對(duì)她獻(xiàn)殷勤”。 　　3．A→One　　導(dǎo)解：one day/week等作狀語，此時(shí)不能用冠詞代替。 　　4．a(chǎn)nd刪去　　導(dǎo)解：上句when引導(dǎo)狀語從句，這一行的she…為主句。 　　5．√ 　　6．a(chǎn)nyone→someone　　導(dǎo)解：表示“一個(gè)人，某人”，服務(wù)員在和人交談。 　　7．paid→paying　　導(dǎo)解：“他沒有注意她”，用主動(dòng)語態(tài)。 　　8．has→had　　導(dǎo)解：與上下文保持一致，用過去完成時(shí)。 　　9．it→she　　導(dǎo)解：指Jane． 　　10．brightly→bright　　導(dǎo)解：bright red表示“鮮紅的”。