請修改下面的短文。短文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯誤涉及單詞的增加，刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（∧），并在其下面寫出修改后的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉。

修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1，每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2，只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不記分。

Many times when I was at a bad mood I shouted at the people around me. I

scream, shouted and ran as fast as I could relieve my pressure. So it was useless,

since I still had to return to the problem. This term I begin to change. I have realized

however greater the difficulty is, I have to face with it. It’s no use screaming and

shouting at others. Beside, there are teachers and friends around me who are ready to

helping me. As long as I try my best, I can make a progress in any aspect. Now I feel

every day is a pleasant day and the sun is always shining bright on my face.

 

【答案】

 was后面加in

 scream改為screamed

 could后面加to

 So改為But

 greater改為great

 去掉with

 Beside改為Besides

 helping改為help

 去掉a

 bright改為brightly

【解析】

試題分析：

 was后面加in 固定詞組in a bad mood情緒不好。

 scream改為screamed 本問講述的是過去的時候，故使用一般過去時。

 could后面加to 后面的不定式表示的是目的狀語。

 So改為But 上下文是轉折關系，但是這都是沒有用的。

 greater改為great 本句沒有比較級的意思，無論困難有多么大。

 去掉with 動詞face是一個及物動詞，后面直接加賓語。

 Beside改為Besides 副詞besides表示“而且”，上下文有遞進的關系。

 helping改為help 固定詞組be ready to do sth樂意做某事，

 去掉a 名詞progress是一個不可數(shù)名詞，不能有a修飾。

 bright改為brightly 用副詞brightly修飾動詞shining。

考點：考查學生在上下文語境中對詞匯語法的掌握情況

點評：本題考查較為細致，要求考生要特別耐心答題中注意句子中人稱和數(shù)是否一致，時態(tài)是否一致。各種詞性之間的區(qū)別以及一些常用句型，固定短語的應用。一般的這類題型不會出現(xiàn)太復雜的單詞和句子，這類題型考察基礎知識較多。平時應注重積累，熟記一些句型及慣用結構。修改前先細讀短文，標出出錯的位置，改完以后還得細讀短文，看看改過后的短文是否語意通順，符合邏輯。

 

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