Question

請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下圖，按如下要求完成一篇英語(yǔ)短文：
1. 簡(jiǎn)要描述圖片內(nèi)容；2. 發(fā)表個(gè)人感想。

注意：1.題目自擬；2.詞數(shù)120左右；3.文中不能出現(xiàn)考生的具體信息。

Answer 1

Many Hands Make Light Work
As we can see in the picture, there is a river and a group of ants. Some ants are working together to build an “ant bridge” so that their group members are able to cross the river and reach their final destination.
In my opinion, this picture vividly shows the importance of teamwork. It is impossible for a single ant to cross the river, but when they work together as a group, they can achieve their goals. Similarly in our life, an individual person cannot easily carry out a challenging task on his own without joining hands with others. In fact, there are a lot of occasions when teamwork is needed, such as ball games, project learning and even parties. As long as every one of us combines our efforts, we can surely cross the “river” in our life, just like what the little ants do in the picture.

試題分析：這是一篇看圖作文，認(rèn)真讀圖，可知圖畫反映了團(tuán)隊(duì)協(xié)作的力量，寫作時(shí)不要僅僅對(duì)要點(diǎn)進(jìn)行生硬的翻譯，而是要添加些內(nèi)容，使文章看起來(lái)更充實(shí)，要組成一篇通順連貫的短文。需要注意緊扣文章主題，給出的要點(diǎn)都需要包括，缺一不可。寫作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，一定要契合給出的開頭，不能出現(xiàn)文章脫節(jié)問(wèn)題。盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時(shí)也要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型使文章顯得更有檔次。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】范文出現(xiàn)了一些常用的詞組：carry out 實(shí)施，執(zhí)行，on his own 單獨(dú)，join hands with和…聯(lián)手，還有一個(gè)很大的特點(diǎn)，就是句式多變：As we can see in the picture, there is a river and a group of ants. 這句話用了定語(yǔ)從句，Some ants are working together to build an “ant bridge” so that their group members are able to cross the river and reach their final destination. 這句話用了結(jié)果狀語(yǔ)從句， In my opinion, this picture vividly shows the importance of teamwork. It is impossible for a single ant to cross the river, 這句話用了it做形式主語(yǔ)， As long as every one of us combines our efforts, we can surely cross the “river” in our life, just like what the little ants do in the picture.這句話用了賓語(yǔ)從句。