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英語(yǔ)課上，老師要求同桌同學(xué)相互修改作文。假設(shè)以下作文為你同桌所寫，請(qǐng)你對(duì)其進(jìn)行修改。共有10處錯(cuò)誤，每句最多兩處。錯(cuò)誤涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。
增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏詞符號(hào)（∧），并在此符號(hào)下面寫出該加的詞。
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉。
修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。
注意：1 每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞。
2 只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不記分。
3 必須按答題要求做題，否則不給分。
I saw an accident happened on my way to home this afternoon. A girl was crossing the
street on a zebra crossing while a young man drove a motorbike towards her. The young
man saw the girl and tried to stop, and he drove too fast to stop. He hit the girl and fell
off her motorbike. The girl was badly hurt and couldn’t move. The young man didn’t
know how to do. I ran to a phone box nearby and dialed 110. Soon the police reached.
They sent her hospital at once. One of the policeman talked to the young man and wrote
something down while was talking. I think it is very dangerous to drive very fast.

Answer 1

I saw an accident happened on my way to（去掉） home this afternoon. A girl was crossing the
Happen（固定結(jié)構(gòu)see sb do sth）
street on a zebra crossing while a young man drove a motorbike towards her. The young
when(后面句子中的動(dòng)詞是短暫性動(dòng)詞，而while只能和延續(xù)性動(dòng)詞連用)
man saw the girl and tried to stop, and he drove too fast to stop. He hit the girl and fell
but（根據(jù)上下文可知這里是轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系）
off her motorbike. The girl was badly hurt and couldn’t move. The young man didn’t
his（上文提及的司機(jī)是男性）
know how to do. I ran to a phone box nearby and dialed 110. Soon the police reached.
What（what作為do的賓語(yǔ)）                             arrived(reach是及物動(dòng)詞，后面要有賓語(yǔ))
They sent her∧ hospital at once. One of the policeman talked to the young man and wrote
To（send sb to…）              policemen(one of 后面要接復(fù)數(shù)名詞)
something down while∧ was（去掉） talking. I think it is very dangerous to drive very fast.
(或加he) （狀語(yǔ)從句的省略形式，當(dāng)狀語(yǔ)從句的主語(yǔ)和主句一致時(shí)，可以省略主語(yǔ)和be動(dòng)詞）                

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