Question

假如你是深圳大運會(the 26^th Universiade)志愿者李華，您的英國朋友Bob即將來深圳旅游，應他的要求，請您寫一封e-mail，介紹深圳灣體育中心(Shenzhen Bay Sports Center)——“春繭”(the Spring Cocoon)。

 

 

[寫作內容]

位置	深圳市南山中心區(qū)東北角，毗鄰香港
開工---竣工時間	2008年10月---2010年底
結構：	建筑面積約32.6萬平方米。包括體育場、體育館、游泳館(natatorium)和星級酒店
用途	第26屆大運會開幕式和足球賽、乒乓球賽、游泳等比賽和訓練。大運會后免費向市民開放。
特點	深圳的新地標(landmark)，代表了深圳市的城市形象
“春繭”的寓意	優(yōu)秀青年運動員沖向世界“破繭而出”

[寫作要求]

1．只能使用5個句子表達全部內容；

2．文中不能出現(xiàn)真實姓名和學校名稱；

3. 注意：信的開頭和結尾已給出。

 

Dear Bob,

I was so glad to hear that you are coming to Shenzhen for a travel.    _______________________________________________________________________________

SincerelyYours,

Li Hua

 

Answer 1

【答案】

參考范文

Dear Bob,

I was so glad to hear that you are coming to Shenzhen for a travel.

Shenzhen Bay Sports Center, nicknamed as the “Spring Cocoon” because of its shape of a cocoon, is located at the northeast corner of the center of Nanshan District, Shenzhen and next to Hong Kong. Covering an area of 326,000 square metres, it includes a stadium, a gym, a natatorium and some star hotels. Its construction work started in October 2008 and came to an end at the end of 2010. It was in the Spring Cocoon that the opening ceremony of 26^th Universiade was held as well as the training and competitions for football , pingpong ball, swimming and so on and after the Universiade it will be open to the public. As a new landmark representing the image of Shenzhen City, it means that excellent young athletes rush out of the cocoon and into the world.

SincerelyYours,

Li Hua

【解析】【寫作點撥】

1.這是一篇介紹深圳灣體育中心是一篇典型的說明文，時態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)為主，其它時態(tài)為輔；

2.在表達時注意專有名詞的大寫、時間、位置、面積的表達，不要混淆體育場和體育館的英語名稱的寫法；

3.為表達較復雜，可適當使用分詞短語作狀語或定語、強調句等復雜結構。