Question

假如你們將舉辦新年晚會(huì)， 現(xiàn)請(qǐng)你以學(xué)生會(huì)的名義寫一封邀請(qǐng)信， 邀請(qǐng)?jiān)谀阈９ぷ鞯耐饧�教師Mr.Green 來參加。有關(guān)內(nèi)容如下：

1．晚會(huì)時(shí)間：下周五晚7：00—9：00。

2．晚會(huì)的地點(diǎn)：學(xué)校禮堂。

3．晚會(huì)節(jié)目：本校師生表演的中國(guó)傳統(tǒng)民歌、舞蹈，中國(guó)樂器演奏及話劇小品等。

4．希望Mr. Green 屆時(shí)也能表演一個(gè)精彩節(jié)目。

提示的詞語：以學(xué)生會(huì)名義：  on behalf of the Students’ Union

話劇小品：   short plays of traditional style

寫作要求：

1 文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱；

2.信的格式開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)寫出。

Dear Mr.Green,

_______________________________________________________________________________

We do look forward eagerly to your participation..

Yours,

Li Ming

 

Answer 1

【答案】

A possible version

On behalf of the Students’ Union, I am writing this letter to invite you to participate in our New Year Evening Party. The party is going to be held in the school meeting hall from 7:00 to 9:00 p.m. next Friday. Many wonderful performances presented by the teachers and students in our school, will be shown on the stage, such as the Chinese folk songs and dances, Chinese musical instruments, short plays of traditional style and so on. So it will surely offer you a good opportunity to obtain a clear picture of Chinese traditional culture. We should be very glad if you could come, and meanwhile, our evening party would be more cheerful if you could also deliver a performance.

【解析】本文是一封邀請(qǐng)函。邀請(qǐng)Mr.Green來參加新年晚會(huì)，在這封信中一定要把與新年晚會(huì)有關(guān)的所有信息都包括在內(nèi)，不能有遺漏。在表達(dá)的時(shí)候力求簡(jiǎn)潔，準(zhǔn)確�？梢赃x擇使用一些高級(jí)詞匯如opportunity等，也要使用一些合適的連接詞如meanwhile，讓文章更有條理，更流暢。