Question

【題目】假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯誤涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉。

修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1.每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2.只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。

Silina used to dreaming of being a singer and she has relied her confidence to practice singing for 10 years. Although she was turned up by many bands because she was overweight, she never gave up and stuck to sing. At the same time, she has lost weight successful by keeping a balanced diet and exercising regularly, in which has earned her success. Now his voice is familiar to everyone. She attaches great importance on not giving up and working hard! When talked about her past, she said: “Success is not always the easy thing and if we want to succeed, we must devote ourselves to it.”

Answer 1

【答案】1.dreaming-dream

2.relied后加on

3.up-down

4.sing-singing

5.successful- successfully

6.in which去掉in

7.his-her

8.on-to

9.talked-talking

10.the-an

【解析】本文主要講了Silina過去常常夢想著成為一名歌唱家，因為超重，她被許多樂隊拒絕。后來她減肥成功，實現了自己的夢想。

考查固定句型。Silina過去常常夢想著成為一名歌唱家。used to do過去常常做某事，是固定用法，所以dreaming-dream。

考查固定短語。她依靠她的信心練習唱歌十年。rely on依靠，依賴，是固定短語，所以relied后加on。

考查固定短語。因為超重，她被許多樂隊拒絕。turn down拒絕，是固定短語，所以填up-down。

考查固定用法。stick to doing堅持做某事，是固定用法，所以sing-singing。

考查副詞。修飾動詞短語lost weight，用副詞，所以successful- successfully。

考查定語從句。which has earned her success.是一個定語從句，修飾整個主句內容，關系詞在從句中作主語，用which，所以in which去掉in。

考查代詞。這里指“Silina的嗓音”，Silina是女的，所以his-her。

考查固定用法。attach great importance to重視; 高度重視; 非常重視，是固定用法，所以on-to。

考查非謂語動詞。talk about與其邏輯主語she之間是主動關系，用現在分詞，所以talked-talking。

考查冠詞。成功不是一件容易的事情。泛指“一件容易的事情”，且easy首字母發(fā)音是元音，所以用不定冠詞an，the-an。