Question

【題目】短文改錯(cuò)

請(qǐng)修改下面的短文。短文中共有10處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯(cuò)誤涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)(∧)，并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線(\)劃掉。

修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1. 每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；2. 只允許修改10處，多者(從第11處起)不計(jì)分。

It is well-known that good habits do us good all our life. Entered high school, I took delight in having fast food and often eat too much. In the end, I was so serious overweight that I suffered a lot from my awkward appearance. It made matters worse was the fact that my classmates made a fun of me at times. From now on, I made up my mind to avoiding snacks. In the meanwhile, I took off jogging to lose weight. To my surprise, it was not long until I did succeed in creating my new appearance. Only then I start to appreciate the importance of developing a good habit.

Answer 1

【答案】

【1】Entered → Entering

【2】eat → ate

【3】serious → seriously

【4】It → What

【5】去掉a

【6】now → then

【7】avoiding → avoid

【8】off → up

【9】until → before

【10】I 前加did

【解析】

【1】本句的謂語(yǔ)是took,所以enter屬于非謂語(yǔ)，而且主語(yǔ)I與動(dòng)詞enter之間是主動(dòng)關(guān)系，所以用它的現(xiàn)在分詞。故答案為Entered 改為 Entering。

【2】根據(jù)前面的謂語(yǔ)took可知此處應(yīng)該用動(dòng)詞的過(guò)去式。故答案為eat 改為 ate 。

【3】此處需要副詞修飾后面的形容詞。故答案為serious 改為seriously。

【4】本句中的主語(yǔ)從句中缺少主語(yǔ)，而且是連詞引導(dǎo)主語(yǔ)從句。故答案為 It 改為What。

【5】make fun of是固定短語(yǔ)，意思是取笑。故答案為去掉a。

【6】根據(jù)句意，應(yīng)該是從那時(shí)起。故答案為now 改為 then。

【7】make up one’s mind to do sth.下定決心作某事。故答案為avoiding改為avoid。

【8】take up從事; take off脫掉；根據(jù)句意，此處表示從事慢走來(lái)減肥。故答案為off 改為 up。

【9】it was not long before…是固定句式，意思是沒(méi)有多久就……。故答案為until 改為 before 。

【10】only加副詞防于句首，句子部分倒裝，即把助動(dòng)詞或是be動(dòng)詞或是情態(tài)動(dòng)詞放在主語(yǔ)前。故答案為在I 前加did。