Question

【題目】假如你是光明中學(xué)的李華，今年夏天你去農(nóng)村朋友家玩，看到大量良田被廢棄，你覺得很可惜。請你根據(jù)下列要點，給某英文報社寫一封信，以此呼吁政府采取措施，來解決這一問題。

要點：

1.看到的現(xiàn)象；

2.分析可能的原因: 大量年輕人棄鄉(xiāng)進城；干旱的天氣；工業(yè)污染等。

3.呼吁政府采取措施。

注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；

2.可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫；

3.開頭語和結(jié)語已為你寫好。

Dear Sir or Madam，

I'm I.i Hua, a student from Guangming Middle School.

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Hoping to receive your early reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Sir or Madam,

I am Li Hua, a student from Guangming Middle School. When I went to see a friend in the countryside this summer, I was shocked to find a large quantity of farming land deserted.

The reasons are various. Firstly, the terrible weather caused the land to become too dry to grow crops, and some of it was finally deserted. Secondly, large pieces of farmland have been polluted by the waste water discarded from the factory nearby. In addition, with the development of cities and towns, many young people are choosing to work in cities instead of taking up farm work.

As we all know, food is of great significance for our human beings' survival. Therefore, measures should be taken to stop the farmland being deserted any more. Otherwise, we have no land to grow crops on to feed ourselves in the near future.

【解析】

本文為材料作文。材料要求寫你的見聞，分析事情的成因，以及應(yīng)采取的措施，因此，要用一般過去時和一般現(xiàn)在時。寫作時不能遺漏要點，力求表達準確。要適當運用連接詞使上下文的連貫，行文流暢，符合文章的邏輯關(guān)系。

本文第一段闡述了現(xiàn)象，第二段分析原因，第三段提出措施，要點完整，層次分明，結(jié)構(gòu)嚴謹，全文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊。文章中運用了大量的短語為文章增色，如：stop the farming land from being wasted， be shocked to；a large quantity of；caused sth to happen，with the development of。連詞firstly…，secondly…,in addition….，therefore和otherwise，把句子連接起來，一氣呵成。

文章中簡單句與復(fù)合句相結(jié)合，主動與被動相結(jié)合。句式靈活多樣，復(fù)雜得體。如狀語從句When I went to see a friend in the countryside this summer, I was shocked to find a large quantityof …；and引導(dǎo)的并列句the terrible weather caused the land to become too dry to grow crops, and some of it was finally deserted；as引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句As we all know, food is of great significance for our human beings' survival。文章中了中也有非謂語的運用，如weather caused the land to become too dry to grow 和waste water discarded from the factory nearby是過去分詞作定語；no land to grow crops on是動詞不定式作定語。