Question

In the past my hometown was used to be a beautiful place. Thick trees and green grass could be seen in everywhere. In order to build house and grow more crops, people cut down more and more trees. With time went on, the whole forest was almost destroyed. Gradually the green hills have changed into wasteland. As a result, sandstorms struck us now and then, of which we suffer a lot. However, I do hope all the people should realize the terribly result of not caring about our environment. What's more, they should take good care of the forests and plant trees instead cutting them down to improve our living conditions. 

Answer 1

小題1:去掉was
小題2:去掉in
小題3:house 改為houses
小題4:with 改為as;或 went改為going
小題5:struck 改為strike
小題6:of 改為from
小題7:however改為therefore
小題8:terribly改為terrible
小題9:they改為we
小題10:instead后加of

試題分析：
小題1:句意，過去我的家鄉(xiāng)曾經(jīng)是一個(gè)美麗的地方。used to過去曾經(jīng)，所以去掉was。
小題2:句意，到處可以看到茂密的樹和綠色的草。去掉in。
小題3:根據(jù)and grow more crops，可知這里應(yīng)該用名詞復(fù)數(shù)，所以house 改為houses。
小題4:隨著時(shí)間的流逝，應(yīng)該說as time went by，所以with 改為as;或 went改為going。
小題5:表示經(jīng)�；蚍磸�(fù)發(fā)生的動(dòng)作，用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，所以struck 改為strike。
小題6:suffer from是固定用法，意思是遭受，suffer from指外因，而suffer of指內(nèi)因，這里指外因，所以of 改為from。
小題7:句意：因此，我希望所有的人都意識(shí)到這個(gè)不關(guān)心環(huán)境的可怕的后果。所以however改為therefore。
小題8:用形容詞修飾名詞result，所以terribly改為terrible。
小題9:這里想說此外，我們應(yīng)該照顧好森林。所以they改為we。
小題10:instead of是固定用法，意思是代替，后面接動(dòng)詞-ing形式。