【題目】Teenagers雜志Conversation With Brad欄目的負責人Brad收到了李華的一封來信。仔細閱讀下面的來信，幫助Brad用英語寫一封回信, 給出分析并提出合理建議。回信應(yīng)包括以下要點：

1．定期與父母交流。2．盡量避免與他們爭執(zhí)。3．其他你認為可行的途徑。

Dear Brad,

I’m a student from Xinhua Senior High School. I have some difficulty communicating with my parents. Although I have tried my best, I find it really difficult to make them satisfied……So I feel lonely sometimes. I would be grateful if you could give me some advice.

Yours,

Li Hua

注意：1.可適當增加細節(jié)。2.詞數(shù)：120左右。

Dear Li Hua,

I feel greatly honored to be trusted with your personal affairs.

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【答案】

【解析】

本篇書面表達是應(yīng)用文，要求寫一封書信。

第1步：根據(jù)提示可知，本文要求寫一封回信；Teenagers雜志Conversation With Brad欄目的負責人Brad收到了李華的一封來信，信中說自己和父母交流有困難，請你幫助Brad用英語寫一封回信, 給出分析并提出合理建議。回信應(yīng)包括以下要點:1.定期與父母交流。2.盡量避免與他們爭執(zhí)。3.其他你認為可行的途徑。時態(tài)應(yīng)為一般現(xiàn)在時。

第2步：根據(jù)寫作要求，確定關(guān)鍵詞（組），如：communicate（交流），avoid（避免），argument（爭執(zhí)），the generation gap（代溝），natural（自然的），expectation（期望），satisfied（滿意的）及respect（尊重）等。

第3步：根據(jù)提示及關(guān)鍵詞（組）進行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時態(tài)問題。

第4步：連句成文，注意使用恰當?shù)倪B詞進行句子之間的銜接與過渡，書寫一定要規(guī)范清晰，保持卷面的整潔美觀。

本文內(nèi)容完整，層次分明，結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，表達準確。另外全文中沒有中國式英語的句式，顯示了很高的駕馭英語的能力。

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