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4．"天行健，君子以自強(qiáng)不息"，請你以好朋友的名義，給處于緊張高考備考中的高三學(xué)生李華寫一封信，詞數(shù)100左右，鼓勵(lì)他增強(qiáng)自信、認(rèn)真?zhèn)淇迹?br />提示：①適度的緊張是有益的；
②提高效率、勞逸結(jié)合；
③保持樂觀、自信．
注意：1．詞數(shù)100左右；
2．可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
Dear Li Hua，
        ．
Yours，
Xiao ming．

Answer 1

分析 本篇書面表達(dá)屬于提綱類作文，根據(jù)提示信息給處于緊張高考備考中的高三學(xué)生李華寫一封信，寫作時(shí)注意以下幾點(diǎn)：1、仔細(xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，明確幾個(gè)要點(diǎn)：：①適度的緊張是有益的；②提高效率、勞逸結(jié)合；③保持樂觀、自信． 2、提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進(jìn)行分析、構(gòu)思和想象．要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語，按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來寫．本文寫作時(shí)可以按照要點(diǎn)所給的順序?qū)懀?、根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定句子的時(shí)態(tài)、語態(tài)；就本文而言應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)．4．注意使用高級詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點(diǎn)．
【亮點(diǎn)說明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達(dá)：As your good friend，I want to offer you some advice，which I hope will be somewhat helpful to you．句中使用了非限制性定語從句；What's more，you must pay attention to the efficiency while making preparations．（高分句型二）句中使用了"連詞+分詞"結(jié)構(gòu)；After all，"All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy"，as the old saying goes．（高分句型三）句中引用了諺語和as引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句

解答 Dear Li Hua，
　　I hear that you are getting anxious about the coming college entrance examination （CEE）．As your good friend，I want to offer you some advice，which I hope will be somewhat helpful to you．（高分句型一）
　　You are not alone．To be frank，everyone tends to become a little nervous with the approach of CEE．However，if coped with properly，it can do good to you instead．What's more，you must pay attention to the efficiency while making preparations．（高分句型二） At the same time，do spare some time to relax yourself and never make yourself too exhausted．After all，"All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy"，as the old saying goes．（高分句型三）
"A rainbow always appears after a storm．"You are bound to make it as long as you keep confident and optimistic．
　　All the best!
                                                                                                                                        Yours，
                                                                                                                                     Xiao ming．

點(diǎn)評 英語寫作是一項(xiàng)主觀性較強(qiáng)的測試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過程中綜合運(yùn)用語言的能力．在撰寫時(shí)要注意主謂語一致，時(shí)態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實(shí)的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．