【題目】短文改錯(cuò)

假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文, 請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯(cuò)誤, 每句中最多有兩處。錯(cuò)誤涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏詞符號(hào)(∧), 并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線( \ )劃掉。

修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線(__), 并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1. 每處錯(cuò)誤及修改均僅限一詞；2. 只允許修改10處, 多者(從第11處起)不計(jì)分。

Dear Angela,

I’m glad to hear the news you’ll come to Hangzhou for a visit. You know, Hangzhou is a beautiful city on the east coast of China. It is said that Marco Polo, a well-known Italy traveler once visited Hangzhou, and was striking by its beautiful scenery. Hangzhou is one of the oldest cities for a long history. It was the capital of several dynasty. As the result, it has a lot of famous temples and old towers. The West Lake, with green hills on three sides or many beautiful parks around, attracts a large number of visitors at home and at abroad. I think you’ll have a good time during our stay in Hangzhou. I’m looking forward to see you here soon.

Yours,

Li Hua

【答案】

【1】在the news 和 you之間加that

【2】Italy--- Italian

【3】striking--- struck

【4】for--- with

【5】dynasty--- dynasties

【6】the--- a

【7】or--- and

【8】去掉and at abroad中的at

【9】our--- your

【10】see --- seeing

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇回信，麗華給即將來杭州的Angela介紹杭州。

【1】在the news 和 you之間加that the news后面是同位語從句，是the news的具體內(nèi)容，此處缺少引導(dǎo)詞，故在the news 和 you之間加that。

【2】Italy--- Italian 句意：意大利的游客。形容詞修飾名詞，故把Italy--- Italian。

【3】striking--- struck 句意：我被它的景色之美所打動(dòng)。此處是被動(dòng)語態(tài)，故把striking--- struck。

【4】for--- with 句意：杭州是具有悠久歷史的最古老的城市之一。with a long history具有悠久歷史，故把for--- with。

【5】dynasty--- dynasties several（幾個(gè)），修飾可數(shù)名詞復(fù)數(shù)，故把dynasty--- dynasties。

【6】the--- a 固定詞組：as a result結(jié)果，故把the--- a。

【7】or--- and 句意：三面有綠山和很多美麗的公園環(huán)抱。此處表示并列關(guān)系，故把 or--- and。

【8】去掉and at abroad中的at 固定詞組：at home and abroad在國內(nèi)外，故去掉and at abroad中的at。

【9】our--- your 句意：我認(rèn)為你們在杭州期間玩的開心。故把our--- your。

【10】see --- seeing 固定短語：look forward to doing sth“渴望做某事”,其中的to為介詞,不是不定式符號(hào).故把see --- seeing。

【知識(shí)拓展】

1.as a result結(jié)果；as a result of 由于---。As a result，he failed.結(jié)果他失敗了。As a result of his carelessness，he didn’t pass the exam.由于他的粗心，他沒有通過考試。

2.strike/touch/move打動(dòng)、感動(dòng)。What he said touched me deeply.他說的話深深打動(dòng)了我。

3. to作介詞講時(shí)，后面常用名詞、代詞賓格和動(dòng)名詞。

the key to solving the problem 解決這個(gè)問題的關(guān)鍵；the road to success 通向成功的路；a trip to London 倫敦的一次旅行；a visit to Paris pay巴黎的一次訪問；pay attention to 重視； object to反對；look forward to期盼。

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