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9．假設(shè)你是李華，你從小在美國(guó)長(zhǎng)大的堂兄Jimmy來(lái)信，信中說(shuō)他今年想回來(lái)和你們一起過(guò)春節(jié)，并詢問(wèn)了你一些關(guān)于春節(jié)的基本情況．請(qǐng)你以李華的名義用英文給他寫(xiě)一封回信，向他介紹一些關(guān)于春節(jié)的知識(shí)，并歡迎他來(lái)你家過(guò)節(jié)，要點(diǎn)如下：
（1）時(shí)間：2017年1月28日，持續(xù)15天；
（2）意義：合家團(tuán)聚，共度新年；
（3）年前準(zhǔn)備：準(zhǔn)備年貨，置辦新衣，打掃除．
（4）春節(jié)：豐盛的家宴，放鞭炮，發(fā)壓歲錢…
（5）期間活動(dòng)：走親訪友，新年祝福．
注意：（1）詞數(shù)100左右
（2）可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
（3）開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)已寫(xiě)好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．
鞭炮 firecracker     壓歲錢 lucky money
Dear Jimmy，
Glad to know that you will come back to spend the Spring Festival with us this year．
The Spring Festival is the most important festival for Chinese people．（高分句型一）This time it will come on Jan.28，2017 and usually it lasts for half a month．It is a time for family members to come back home from afar．For this festival people will clean their houses，have big meals and set off firecrackers．And we children can get some money from elders，which is believed to bring us good luck in the following year．（高分句型二）Then everyone visits their relatives and friends in brand-new clothes，greeting"happy new year"to each other．（高分句型三）
Does it sound fun to you？Come back and join us!
Yours
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本篇書(shū)面表達(dá)屬于提綱類作文，根據(jù)提示信息用英文給寫(xiě)一封回信，向他介紹一些關(guān)于春節(jié)的知識(shí)，并歡迎來(lái)你家過(guò)節(jié)，寫(xiě)作時(shí)注意以下幾點(diǎn)：1、仔細(xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，明確幾個(gè)要點(diǎn)：（1）時(shí)間：2017年1月28日，持續(xù)15天；（2）意義：合家團(tuán)聚，共度新年；（3）年前準(zhǔn)備：準(zhǔn)備年貨，置辦新衣，打掃除．（4）春節(jié)：豐盛的家宴，放鞭炮，發(fā)壓歲錢…（5）期間活動(dòng)：走親訪友，新年祝福． 2、提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進(jìn)行分析、構(gòu)思和想象．要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語(yǔ)，按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來(lái)寫(xiě)．本文寫(xiě)作時(shí)可以按照要點(diǎn)所給的順序?qū)懀?、根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定句子的時(shí)態(tài)、語(yǔ)態(tài)；4．注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點(diǎn)．
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達(dá)：
  The Spring Festival is the most important festival for Chinese people．（高分句型一）春節(jié)是中國(guó)最重要的傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日．
And we children can get some money from elders，which is believed to bring us good luck in the following year．（高分句型二）句中帶有which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語(yǔ)從句
Then everyone visits their relatives and friends in brand-new clothes，greeting"happy new year"to each other．（高分句型三）句中g(shù)reeting"happy new year"to each other屬于現(xiàn)在分詞作伴隨狀語(yǔ)

解答 Dear Jimmy，
    Glad to know that you will come back to spend the Spring Festival with us this year．
    The Spring Festival is the most important festival for Chinese people．（高分句型一）This time it will come on Jan.28，2017 and usually it lasts for half a month．It is a time for family members to come back home from afar．For this festival people will clean their houses，have big meals and set off firecrackers．And we children can get some money from elders，which is believed to bring us good luck in the following year．（高分句型二）Then everyone visits their relatives and friends in brand-new clothes，greeting"happy new year"to each other．（高分句型三）
    Does it sound fun to you？Come back and join us!
                                                                                                                                                                                                                Yours
                                                                                                                                                                                                                 Li Hua

點(diǎn)評(píng) 英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作是一項(xiàng)主觀性較強(qiáng)的測(cè)試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫(xiě)作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫(xiě)作過(guò)程中綜合運(yùn)用語(yǔ)言的能力．在撰寫(xiě)時(shí)要注意主謂語(yǔ)一致，時(shí)態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語(yǔ)言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實(shí)的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識(shí)造出正確無(wú)誤的句子；二是寫(xiě)作知識(shí)和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫(xiě)作方面的基本方法和技巧．