Question

【題目】假如你是李華，最近你從報紙上看到一家外企公司招聘秘書的廣告，請你根據(jù)下列要點提示給經(jīng)理寫一封應聘信。
1) 今年20歲，即將畢業(yè)于職業(yè)院校。主修經(jīng)濟管理。
2) 學習英語超過八年了，熟悉電腦操作；在過去曾任學生報的編輯，有寫作和編輯經(jīng)驗；在校成績優(yōu)秀。
3) 性格外向，交際能力強。
要求：1) 內(nèi)容要連貫、完整。
2) 敘述必須用第一人稱。
3) 字數(shù):100左右。
參考詞匯：職業(yè)院校vocational school；主修 major in 經(jīng)驗experience 操作
operate
經(jīng)濟管理 business management
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing in response to your advertisement for the position as a secretary in the newspaper.

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing in response to your advertisement for the position as a secretary in the newspaper.

My name is Li Hua and I am twenty years old and I'm going to graduate from a vocational school. I major in business management. Besides, I've learned English for more than eight years and I am familiar with computer operation. In the last three years, I've been one of the editors of our student newspaper, which makes me experienced in writing and editing. I do well in my study and my scores are outstanding in my class.I am outing and good at communicating with others. I am sure that I will be qualified for secretary.

I would appreciate it if you could give me the chance to work in your company. I'm looking forward to your reply.

Yours

Li Hua

【解析】本題是一篇英文信件，要求考生以李華的身份，給經(jīng)理寫一封應聘信，寫作要點已經(jīng)給出，屬于提綱類作文，內(nèi)容包括：1) 今年20歲，即將畢業(yè)于職業(yè)院校。主修經(jīng)濟管理；2) 學習英語超過八年了，熟悉電腦操作；在過去曾任學生報的編輯，有寫作和編輯經(jīng)驗；在校成績優(yōu)秀；3) 性格外向，交際能力強。首先，考生要仔細閱讀提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，明確有哪些要點。 其次，要注意提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進行分析、構思和想象。要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語， 按照一定邏輯關系來寫。 最后，要根據(jù)要表達的內(nèi)容確定句子的時態(tài)、語態(tài)；語言表達要符合英語習慣。寫作時要注意準確運用時態(tài)、語態(tài)、上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關系。根據(jù)句意適當使用并列連詞，同時也要合理運用高級詞匯和高級句子為文章增色添彩。