Question

請(qǐng)結(jié)合材料，按要求用英文寫(xiě)作，詞數(shù)不少于60。
It is reported that a famous young Chinese singing star, Li Daimo, well- liked by many youngsters, took drugs and was taken away by the police.
要求：
（1）就此材料發(fā)表你的感想;
（2）應(yīng)緊扣材料，有明確的觀點(diǎn);
(3) 請(qǐng)?jiān)诖痤}卡上作答。
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Answer 1

One possible version：
The news that li Daimo ,a famous young Chinese singing star liked by many youngsters , took drugs and was taken away by the police shocked the public .I think though people are under great pressure in modern society , they shouldn’t turn to drugs for comfort and relaxiation, especially celebrities. The reason is that the youth often model themselves after these celebrities who should be aware of  the social influence of celebrities . Thus, they should be strict with themselves in all aspects in order to be a good example for others.

試題分析：本文屬于材料作文，此類文章首先要簡(jiǎn)要概述材料內(nèi)容，然后就此發(fā)表議論和看法。寫(xiě)這種作文時(shí)考生發(fā)揮的余地較大，要根據(jù)要求明確提出觀點(diǎn)，然后充分展開(kāi)想象與聯(lián)想，圍繞材料展開(kāi)行文。為了提高分?jǐn)?shù)，寫(xiě)作時(shí)要注意句式的多樣化和高級(jí)詞匯的使用，還要使用適當(dāng)?shù)臅r(shí)態(tài)，此外注意字?jǐn)?shù)不能少于60字�？蓞⒖荚~匯：I think , in my opinion , as far as I am concerned , in my view , the social influence of celebrities。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】作者在本篇范文中首先用一個(gè)長(zhǎng)句The news that  Li Daimo,a famous young Chinese singer loved by many youngsters ,took drugs and was taken away by the police shocked the public 介紹材料內(nèi)容，然后對(duì)此發(fā)表看法，不僅在結(jié)構(gòu)安排上符合材料作文的寫(xiě)作要求，而且也完成了本文的寫(xiě)作要求。實(shí)際上本文的最大亮點(diǎn)就是涵蓋信息量大的長(zhǎng)句的使用，作者一共用了四個(gè)長(zhǎng)句，其中包括同位語(yǔ)從句，狀語(yǔ)從句和并列句等，這充分顯示了作者深厚的寫(xiě)作功底，此外，在本文中作者還使用了高級(jí)詞匯social influence of celebrities, be aware of ，這是文章的另一個(gè)亮點(diǎn)所在。