Question

書面表達(dá)（滿分25分）
假設(shè)你班在“珍愛生命，拒闖紅燈”教育活動(dòng)中，召開了一次主題班會(huì)，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下面的內(nèi)容提示，用英語寫一篇短文。
行人（passer-by）闖紅燈的危害: 妨礙交通，影響車輛的正常行駛， 容易引發(fā)事故，危及他人和自身的安全 ……
對(duì)行人闖紅燈的處罰措施: 批評(píng)教育，讓其意識(shí)到闖紅燈的危害， 當(dāng)場(chǎng)給予警告并罰款
注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；
2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫
參考詞匯：jaywalk 亂穿馬路

Answer 1

One possible version:
Recently we held a class meeting to discuss the problem of passers-by crossing the street while the traffic light is red. As we can see, some passers-by don’t obey traffic rules and jaywalk frequently. This blocks traffic seriously affects drivers and causes accidents to happen, endangering the safety of passers-by and drivers. In a word, jaywalking produces negative effects and does not help develop good social behavior.
It is really a pity to see all this in our society. To deal with the situation, the government has taken some measures. When caught jaywalking, the passers-by are criticized so that they will become aware of the dangers of doing so, or they are fined on the spot. Sometimes the traffic police will report jaywalkers at their workplace and expose them to the public. However, it will take a long time to stop passers-by from jaywalking. We should start from ourselves right now.

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