Question

7．假定英語(yǔ)課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌的以下作文．文中共有10處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處．錯(cuò)誤涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改．
增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)（∧），并在其下面寫(xiě)出該加的詞．
刪除：多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉．
修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫(xiě)出修改后的詞．
注意：（1）每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；
    （2）只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分．
Being responsible is actually not that difficult．I used to think it is hard to grow up into a responsible member of the society．An incident happening in a rainy Sunday afternoon changed my attitude．I was on my way to the bookstore and was waiting for the green light while a girl was knocked down by passing car，which drove off quickly．A man immediately gave her first aid and I had joined in without hesitation．Soon many help was given to the girl．Because we sent her to the nearest hospital in time，she was able to receive properly treatment．Not badly injured，I expressed gratitude to those giving help．Compared with the escaping driver，I was proud of that I did．

Answer 1

分析 本文講述了作者幫助一個(gè)在交通事故中受傷的女孩的故事．
在一個(gè)下雨天，一個(gè)等候綠燈的女孩被一輛車給撞了，司機(jī)逃跑了，一個(gè)路人趕快對(duì)她實(shí)施急救，我也毫不遲疑的加入了，更多的人加入救助女孩的行動(dòng)中，她被送到最近的醫(yī)院接受治療，她很感激我們，我也為自己驕傲．

解答 Being responsible is actually not that difficult．I used to think it is hard to grow up into a responsible member of the society．An incident happening in a rainy Sunday afternoon changed my attitude．I was on my way to the bookstore and was waiting for the green light while a girl was knocked down by∧passing car，which drove off quickly．A man immediately gave her first aid and I had joined in without hesitation．Soon many help was given to the girl．Because we sent her to the nearest hospital in time，she was able to receive properly treatment．Not badly injured，I expressed gratitude to those giving help．Compared with the escaping driver，I was proud of that I did．
解析：
1：is改為was．考查時(shí)態(tài)．因?yàn)檫@是作者過(guò)去以為的事情，用一般過(guò)去時(shí)，主語(yǔ)是it．故is改成was．
2：in改為 on．考查介詞．和具體的某一天的下午"a rainy Sunday afternoon"搭配用介詞on．故in改成on．
3：while改為when．考查狀語(yǔ)從句的引導(dǎo)詞．a(chǎn) girl was knocked down 是時(shí)間點(diǎn)，和when搭配，while和一段時(shí)間搭配．故while改成when．
4：by后面加a．考查冠詞．這里泛指"一輛路過(guò)的車"，用不定冠詞，passing是輔音音素開(kāi)頭的單詞．故by后面加a．
5：去掉had．考查謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞的時(shí)態(tài)．和gave并列的動(dòng)作用一般過(guò)去時(shí)．去掉had．
6：many改為much．考查不可數(shù)名詞的修飾詞．help"幫助"是不可數(shù)名詞，用much修飾，many修飾可數(shù)名詞．改成much．
7：properly改成proper．考查形容詞和副詞的辨析．修飾名詞treatment用形容詞．故properly改成proper．
8：I改成she．考查代詞．句意：受傷不重，她表達(dá)對(duì)幫助的人的感謝．因?yàn)槭桥�孩受傷，人稱應(yīng)該是she．I改成she．
9：escaping改成escaped．考查非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞．"逃跑的司機(jī)"用escaped，表示動(dòng)作已經(jīng)完成．故escaping改成escaped．
10：that改為what．考查名詞性從句的引導(dǎo)詞．引導(dǎo)I was proud of 的賓語(yǔ)從句I did，做從句I did的賓語(yǔ)用what．that在名詞性從句中不做句子成分．

點(diǎn)評(píng) 考查短文改錯(cuò)．
解答類題型時(shí)，要注意一下幾點(diǎn)：
1．注意句子中人稱和數(shù)是否一致．
2．時(shí)態(tài)是否一致．
3．各種詞性之間的區(qū)別．
4．一些常用句型，固定短語(yǔ)的應(yīng)用．
一般的這類題型不會(huì)出現(xiàn)太復(fù)雜的單詞和句子，這類題型考查的就是我們的基礎(chǔ)知識(shí)．平時(shí)應(yīng)注重積累，熟記一些句型及慣用結(jié)構(gòu)．