Question

假如你是李華，你最喜歡的歌手Eason（陳奕迅）

下個月將到你市演出。近日你準備和幾個朋友成立Eason的歌迷俱樂部(fan club)。請你給你的加拿大筆友Freddy發(fā)一封100詞左右的e-mail，

內(nèi)容包括：1.表達你們的喜悅之情，

2.簡單介紹Eason的個人信息，或你們喜歡Eason的理由（3個），

4.希望Freddy也加入你們，一起分享喜悅。

注意：可適當發(fā)揮，以使行文連貫。信件的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。下表里有些信息可以幫助你完成作文。

中文名：	陳奕迅
英文名：	Eason Chan
籍貫：	中國香港
評價：	開朗，才華洋溢，努力， 曲風獨特，樂于助人，受年輕人的歡迎
職業(yè)：	歌手 演員
畢業(yè)院校：	英國金斯頓大學Kingston University
重要事件：	香港十大勁歌金曲最受歡迎男歌手 the most popular male singer of the top ten pop musicians in Hong Kong 臺灣金曲獎最佳國語男歌手 the best Chinese pop singer in Taiwan
代表作品：	《K歌之王》”King of Karaoke”;《富士山下》”Under  Mount Fuji”等。

Dear Freddy，

I’m glad to tell you that Eason, my favorite singer, will come to our city to perform next month.

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Looking forward to your reply soon.

Best wishes,

Yours,

Li Hua

 

Answer 1

【答案】

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Dear Freddy,

I’m glad to tell you that Eason, my favorite singer, will come to our city to perform next month.

I’m so pleased at the news that I decided to form a Eason fan club with some of my friends. Eason was born in Hong Kong. He was so good at singing that he used to win the prizes of “the most popular male singer of the top ten pop musicians in Hong Kong” and “the best Chinese pop singer in Taiwan” All of us like him and enjoy his songs very much. He is very charming and talented! His songs, such as  “King of Karaoke” and “Under Mount Fuji” make us feel the true love. We can sing most of his songs and would like to know more about him.

We can’t wait to see him face to face and to sing together with him! Why not come and join us to enjoy his wonderful performance in my city?

Looking forward to your reply soon.

Best wishes                                         Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

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考點：這是一封信。

點評：考生不能遺漏要點要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，盡可能的使用較復雜的句子結(jié)構(gòu)，盡量使用高級詞匯以便得到較高的分數(shù)�？忌�注意使用過渡詞或者過渡句來使文章讀起來比較流暢。動筆前，一定要認真分析要點，理解要點要表達的含義。平時除了加強詞匯積累，寫作練習以外，還可以適當背誦一些類似的范文，這樣在考試中可以起到事半功倍的效果。