Question

越來越多的學(xué)生在校外租房而不愿住宿舍。請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面提示，用英語寫一篇短文，說說各自的好處與壞處，并表明自己的觀點(diǎn)。

1．學(xué)習(xí)時(shí)間； 2. 安全；  3. 自由性； 4. 與同學(xué)交往；   5. 學(xué)習(xí)效果。

注意：

1. 可從其他角度闡述，但兩方面的理由都至少要有兩條；

2. 詞數(shù)100左右。宿舍：dorm

 

Answer 1

【答案】

Nowadays, some students would not like to live in a dorm. Instead, they rent houses outside the school.

There are advantages for both. Living in a dorm can increase friendship and cooperation between classmates. And of course it is safer. A dorm is more like a society, which enables students to learn to adopt to each other, thus preparing for the social life in the future.

As for renting houses to live alone, it’s better for study ,as you can feel free in your own room without being interrupted by others. As a result, you can have more time and devote yourself to studying. But there may appear some safety problems as you live outside of the school.

Anyhow, as a student, I prefer living in a dorm.

【解析】

試題分析：考查提綱類作文的寫作。本文是關(guān)于學(xué)生在校外租房的好處與壞處，要點(diǎn)只是給了提綱，具體的內(nèi)容要考生自己發(fā)揮，用地道的英語表達(dá)出來，要使用合適的連接詞來連接各個(gè)要點(diǎn)，使文章成為一個(gè)整體，同時(shí)要運(yùn)用高級(jí)詞匯和句型來提高文章的層次。

考點(diǎn)：考查提綱類短文寫作

點(diǎn)評(píng)：提綱類作文寫作的關(guān)鍵是要點(diǎn)要全面包括，一定要認(rèn)真分析要點(diǎn)，理解要點(diǎn)要表達(dá)的含義，不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，跑題偏題。平時(shí)除了加強(qiáng)詞匯積累，寫作聯(lián)系以外，還可以適當(dāng)記憶一些類似的范文，這樣在考試中可以起到事半功倍的效果。