5．假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文．文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句最多有兩處．每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除和修改．　　
增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞．　　
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉．　　
修改：在錯的詞下畫一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞．　　
注意：1．每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；
　　　　　2．只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分．
Dear Jerry，
     I'm sorry for having no time to pay visit to Hangzhou with you next week．The reason why I can't spare time is because there are many friend of mine who are facing a coming English exam．There has no doubt that it is important for them．They are looking forward on to my giving a hand to them and they hope to get through the exam successful．As a result，I will spend time help them at that time．In addition，I will attend a party which aim to raise money for the people in the earthquake-hit area．But l want to put off their time of the visit to the first weekend of next month．Is it OK？
    Best wishes!
Yours
                                                 Li Hua．

分析 本文主要講述作者下周沒有時間參觀杭州，因為一要為即將到來的英語考試作準(zhǔn)備，二要參加一個募捐晚會．因此要推遲參觀時間，為此而感到抱歉．

解答 Dear Jerry，
     I'm sorry for having no time to pay∧visit to Hangzhou with you next week．The reason why I can't spare time is because there are many friend of mine who are facing a coming English exam．There has no doubt that it is important for them．They are looking forward on to my giving a hand to them and they hope to get through the exam successful．As a result，I will spend time help them at that time．In addition，I will attend a party which aim to raise money for the people in the earthquake-hit area．Butl want to put off their time of the visit to the first weekend of next month．Is it OK？
    Best wishes!
Yours
                                                 Li Hua．
1．加a 考查冠詞．pay a visit to意為"去參觀，拜訪"，是固定搭配．
2．because改為that 考查連詞．the reason后接表語從句時，連詞用that不用because．
3．friend改為friends 考查名詞．friend是可數(shù)名詞，其前有many修飾時，要用復(fù)數(shù)形式friends．
4．has改為is 考查固定搭配．there be意為"有"，不可與表示"有"之意的have連用，且主語doubt是不可數(shù)名詞，be用is．
5．去掉on 考查介詞．look forward to意為"期望，盼望"，是固定搭配．
6．successful改為successfully 考查副詞．get through是動詞短語，要用副詞修飾，形容詞successful的副詞是successfully．
7．help改為helping 考查動名詞．spend time/money （in） doing sth．花費時間（金錢）做某事．
8．a(chǎn)im改為aims 考查動詞時態(tài)．分析句子結(jié)構(gòu)可知這是一個定語從句，先行詞party指物，關(guān)系代詞which是單數(shù)三人稱，謂語動詞也要用單數(shù)三人稱形式aims．
9．But改為So 考查連詞．根據(jù)句意，前后兩個單句表示因果關(guān)系，并不是轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系．
10．their改為our 考查代詞．根據(jù)句意，應(yīng)是推遲"我們的"的時間．

點評 高考短文改錯題的形式有說明文，短文故事，書信等，具有很強的實用性．短文的內(nèi)容和語言都符合高中學(xué)生的實際，從表面上看類似一篇學(xué)生習(xí)作．首先，通讀全文，了解短文大意，把握全篇的時態(tài)、人稱及行文邏輯，在通讀全文時把一些容易的錯誤先改好，再進行逐句改錯．其次，要進行逐個句子的改錯．這是要對文中的詞法、句法和語篇著重分析和特別注意．最后把改好的短文再閱讀一遍，檢查答案是否正確，感覺是否還有不妥之處，最終形成定稿．

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