Question

假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有l(wèi)0處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處錯誤。錯誤涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（∧)，并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線(＼)劃掉。

修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1. 每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2. 只允許修改l0處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。

Xiaolan, who is fourteen, a middle school student in Southern China. She is a one of the best student in her class and  she was won an award for young scientists last year. When seating in the classroom she looks just like all her classmates and after class her life is obvious different. She was born without the ability to use her legs and she has no feeling below the waist. She had to use a wheelchair to get around and it often takes her a little long to do everyday things, such as getting out of bed, getting dressed an d going to the school. So far she has created many programmes and one of which received an award at her province’s science fair.

 

Answer 1

【答案】

    

 a前加is  

 student--- students 

 she后去掉was

 seating---seated

 and---but

 obvious---obviously

 had---has

 long---longer

 going to后去掉the

 which---them

【解析】

試題分析：十四歲的中學生小蘭去年榮獲了青少年科學家獎。當她做在教室里的時候，她與旁人無異，然而課下的生活，她卻是與別人截然不同的，因為她天生殘疾，腰部以下沒有知覺。別人能夠做成的事情，對于她來說卻是要付出很多。

 考查句子結構。Xiaolan, who is fourteen, a middle school student分析結構可知句子缺少謂語動詞，所以在a前加is  。

 考查名詞復數(shù)。She is one of the best student。one of后面需跟復數(shù)名詞，意思是“….其中之一”，所以把student改為 students 。                

 考查謂語動詞。she was won an award ，句中動詞won做謂語，所以把she后was去掉 。

 考查非謂語動詞。When seating in the classroom，從結構可知，該短語做狀語，seat和句子主語she 是被動關系，所以把seating改為seated 。                                                             

 考查連詞用法。and after class her life is different. 從語境可知此句和上句she looks just like all her classmates是轉(zhuǎn)折關系，所以把and改為but。

 考查副詞用法。her life is obvious different。此處different是形容詞，要用副詞修飾，所以把obvious-改為obviously 。

 考查動詞時態(tài)。She had to use a wheelchair全文講述現(xiàn)在的事情，所以把had改為has 。

 考查形容詞用法。it often takes her a little long 從語境可知此處是她與別人相比做事所用的時間要長，所以把long改為longer 。

 考查冠詞用法。and going to the school 。固定短語go to school “去上學”，故去掉the。

 考查代詞用法。and one of which received an award 。 因為有連詞and所以后面是并列句，故需要把關系代詞which改為人稱代詞them 。

考點：考查短文改錯。