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15．為迎接兒童節(jié)的到來，你們學(xué)校號召學(xué)生為希望工程（Project Hope）捐款．請你用英語給�？瘜懸黄�文章，希望同學(xué)們伸出援助之手，奉獻(xiàn)自己的愛心．題目為：Welcome to Donate for Project Hope．內(nèi)容包括：
1、介紹目前中國農(nóng)村兒童狀況．特別是偏遠(yuǎn)地區(qū)的兒童，沒錢讀書，很多孩子輟學(xué)在家
2、捐助希望工程的意義
字?jǐn)?shù)：100左右．

Answer 1

分析 本文是給�？瘜懸黄�文章．希望同學(xué)們伸出援助之手，奉獻(xiàn)自己的愛心．寫作要點已經(jīng)在表格中羅列清晰：1、介紹目前中國農(nóng)村兒童狀況．特別是偏遠(yuǎn)地區(qū)的兒童，沒錢讀書，很多孩子輟學(xué)在家；2、捐助希望工程的意義．只需要發(fā)表些自己的見解即可．注意文章使用的時態(tài)，呈現(xiàn)不同觀點和發(fā)表個人見解多使用一般現(xiàn)在時．寫作過程中注意使用平時學(xué)到的短語和句型，注意行文的連貫和邏輯性．
【亮點說明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達(dá)：In order to以便，為了；call on呼吁，號召；far from遠(yuǎn)不，遠(yuǎn)非；benefit from從…中受益；As is known to all眾所周知；drop from school輟學(xué)；
In order to meet the arrival of Children's Day，our school called on the students to make some donations for the Project Hope．（高分句型一）
  Project Hope is a good way to promote the education in the rural areas，but it is far from being sufficient．（高分句型二）
Since the economic conditions there are rather poor，many families，especially in the remote areas，cannot afford to send their children to school，many children have to drop from school．（高分句型三）

解答 Welcome to Donate for Project Hope
      In order to meet the arrival of Children's Day，our school called on the students to make some donations for the Project Hope．（高分句型一）
      Project Hope is a good way to promote the education in the rural areas，but it is far from being sufficient．（高分句型二）By now，only a small portion/part of the children benefit from it．
      As is known to all，China has the largest population in the world and most of them live in the countryside．Since the economic conditions there are rather poor，many families，especially in the remote areas，cannot afford to send their children to school，many children have to drop from school．（高分句型三）（目前中國農(nóng)村兒童狀況）The"Project Hope"is aimed at solving this problem so that every child of school age can receive regular education．It doesn't matter how much you're going to donate．One hundred yuan will help such a child finish（捐助希望工程的意義）

點評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強(qiáng)的測試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過程中綜合運用語言的能力．在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致，時態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．