日常生活中，每到節(jié)假日，許多學(xué)生往往結(jié)伴外出旅行，或長(zhǎng)途或短途，樂享生活。作為同齡人，你也許有自己獨(dú)到的旅游方式。試推薦一、二種出行方式并陳述其利弊。

要求：120詞左右（不包括已給出部分）。

Nowadays most students enjoy holiday travelling in daily life.

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One possible version:

Nowadays most students enjoy holiday travelling in daily life. Different students choose different transportation means to get refreshed.

As for me, I would recommend riding a bicycle. A bicycle is far cheaper than other major means of transportation. When you ride with your family or friends, you can enjoy more flexibility and freedom. What’s more, riding among bicyclists is not only a sort of unusual enjoyment but also an environmentally friendly experience. Of course, it takes longer time to get to places.

If you go a little farther, I would like you to choose public transportation, like taking a bus. Although less comfortable, the bus is cheaper and more convenient. Besides, you don’t have to take the trouble of caring for it. The disadvantage is that it might take you a while to wait in line.

In conclusion, whichever transportation means you choose, safety comes first. (137 words )

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇關(guān)于陳述利弊的書面表達(dá)。根據(jù)提問可知先要提出自己的旅游方式，然后進(jìn)行陳述它的利與弊，此議題貼切生活，對(duì)于有旅行經(jīng)驗(yàn)的同學(xué)更為好寫點(diǎn)。要嚴(yán)格控制字?jǐn)?shù)要求。不足或超過字?jǐn)?shù)都會(huì)扣分。

亮點(diǎn)說明：文章結(jié)構(gòu)清晰，運(yùn)用黃金三段式寫法，方式，利弊，結(jié)論一目了然。文中用了許多句子結(jié)構(gòu)，如A bicycle is far cheaper than other major means of transportation比較級(jí)的運(yùn)用，not only a sort of unusual enjoyment but also an environmentally friendly experience中not only..but also的運(yùn)用，The disadvantage is that it might take you a while to wait in line.表語從句與it takes some time to do句型結(jié)構(gòu)的復(fù)合，Although less comfortable, the bus is cheaper and more convenient省略句的使用，less comfortable 前省略了it is。還運(yùn)用了許多連詞，如As for，What’s more，Of course，Besides這些連詞的運(yùn)用使得段與段、句子與句子間銜接流暢。一些好的短語如get refreshed，a sort of，take the trouble of等短語和一些精準(zhǔn)的單詞如far cheaper中的far，flexibility and freedom等詞的運(yùn)用使文章不再是千篇一律。這些嫻熟的單詞運(yùn)用、句型結(jié)構(gòu)交錯(cuò)顯示了考生豐厚的日常積累。

考點(diǎn)：考查觀點(diǎn)陳述類書面表達(dá)

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