Question

大多數(shù)人都希望受到別人歡迎，但并非都能做到。請(qǐng)根據(jù)下表問卷調(diào)查結(jié)果，寫一篇題為How to be popular的英文短文。
45%的人認(rèn)為: 1. 改善外表，穿著得體，精神狀態(tài)好     2. 經(jīng)常微笑，待人友善
55%的人認(rèn)為: 1. 培養(yǎng)對(duì)他人的體貼   2. 當(dāng)個(gè)好聽眾   3. 不說別人的壞話
你自己的觀點(diǎn) (至少兩點(diǎn))
注意：1. 短文須包括所有要點(diǎn)，可適度發(fā)揮。
2. 開頭已為你寫好，但不計(jì)人總詞數(shù)。
3. 詞數(shù)：120左右。
How to be popular
Many people desire to be popular with others but not everyone can achieve this goal. What is the secret to popularity?

Answer 1

One possible version:           
How to be popular
Many people desire to be popular with others but not everyone can achieve this goal. What is the secret to popularity?
45% people believe that improving one's appearance, wearing gracefully, and keeping a good state of mind are of vital importance. In the meanwhile, someone who always smiles and treats others friendly can also enhance his or her popularity.
On the other hand,55% people consider that one can make himself(herself) more popular by showing every consideration to others, being a fine audience, and not discussing unpleasant words behind people.
In my opinion, all the main points mentioned above are essential. If one pays attention to the appearance，takes good care of others with heart and soul, moreover, keeps an eye on his(her) words and deeds, he or she must be the "super star" among people.

試題分析：提綱作文要求考生根據(jù)所給的寫作要求和提綱，確定文章的中心思想，然后緊緊圍繞中心思想展開寫作。要求考生在保證內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)全部概括的基礎(chǔ)上可以充分發(fā)揮自己的想象，進(jìn)而用自己的語言來表達(dá)某種觀點(diǎn)或看法，增添了寫作的靈活性，同時(shí)能較好地考查考生的想象能力和英語語言表達(dá)能力。
點(diǎn)評(píng)：寫好提綱式作文的關(guān)鍵是認(rèn)真審題和分析所給的提綱，因此考生首先要認(rèn)真閱讀前面的提示，認(rèn)清寫作要求和提綱之間的關(guān)系，然后確定文章的主題、文體、人稱和時(shí)態(tài)。根據(jù)所給提綱，列出要點(diǎn)，并以此為基礎(chǔ)充分發(fā)揮自己的想象力，靈活運(yùn)用英語知識(shí)，采用不同的表達(dá)方式將各要點(diǎn)完整地表述出來，注意主次分明，詳略得當(dāng)。語言力求準(zhǔn)確、簡(jiǎn)潔。根據(jù)情景的發(fā)展，按順序安排好材料。同時(shí)應(yīng)選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性�？忌�必須認(rèn)真查驗(yàn)是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯(cuò)誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等。