Question

【題目】請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下面這幅漫畫，用英語(yǔ)寫一篇短文。短文內(nèi)容應(yīng)該包括以下三個(gè)方面：

1. 簡(jiǎn)述漫畫的內(nèi)容；

2. 分析漫畫反映的社會(huì)問(wèn)題，并闡述其產(chǎn)生的原因；

3. 發(fā)表自己的感受，并給出解決此問(wèn)題的措施。

【注意事項(xiàng)】

1. 對(duì)所有要點(diǎn)逐一陳述，適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，不要簡(jiǎn)單翻譯。

2. 詞數(shù)150字左右。

3. 作文中不得提及有關(guān)考生個(gè)人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等。

參考詞匯：nutritive products 營(yíng)養(yǎng)品

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Answer 1

【答案】As is vividly shown in the picture, the department store which sells children’s nutritive products is being surrounded by crowds of parents, making the saleswoman very busy. In contrast, the neighboring department selling similar products of the old seems unpopular. The saleswoman can not help falling asleep.

The picture reflects a common social phenomenon—people tend to care more for their children than their parents. There are several reasons accounting for it. For one thing, young couples are eager to prepare their kids for a bright future by raising them healthily. For another thing, young couples fail to spend time with their old parents because they are too busy with their work.

From where I stand, showing respecting for the old is a traditional virtue of China. Busy as people are, the duty should not be ignored and every one should go back home to accompany their parents as often as possible.

【解析】本文是漫畫作文。圖畫作文的寫作要領(lǐng)：1、根據(jù)提示，準(zhǔn)確審題。要注意文體，人物和時(shí)態(tài)。2、認(rèn)真讀圖，把握情境，進(jìn)行圖文轉(zhuǎn)換。這是關(guān)鍵。要根據(jù)圖畫中的人物及背景，確定人物之間，人物與背景之間的關(guān)系。從整體上把握所呈現(xiàn)的主要內(nèi)容，圍繞特定的主題合理想象。然后將圖畫所傳達(dá)的信息以文字的形式呈現(xiàn)出來(lái)，并對(duì)轉(zhuǎn)換后的內(nèi)容重新組合，確定主要內(nèi)容。3、發(fā)表感想。圍繞主題展開合理的想象，發(fā)表自己的聯(lián)想或感想。4、確定段落，擬好提綱，斟酌詞句，組句成文。

分析這兩副圖，主要講述了現(xiàn)代社會(huì)的一種現(xiàn)象：現(xiàn)代人由于忙于工作而忽略了年邁的父母，但卻對(duì)自己的孩子關(guān)心備至。原因之一，因?yàn)楣ぷ髅�無(wú)法與父母在一起。而年輕夫婦渴望通過(guò)健康地?fù)狃B(yǎng)孩子，讓他們有一個(gè)光明的未來(lái)。

亮點(diǎn)分析：文中要點(diǎn)齊全，結(jié)構(gòu)合理，層次清晰，行文連貫。句式靈活多變，主動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)與被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)交錯(cuò)。復(fù)合句中的定語(yǔ)從句，狀語(yǔ)從句，名詞從句，復(fù)雜句都有出現(xiàn)，還運(yùn)用了由as引導(dǎo)的倒裝句。文章中還多處出現(xiàn)了非謂語(yǔ)作定語(yǔ)、主語(yǔ)及狀語(yǔ)等，從而增加文章的可讀性。文中的連詞如“For one thing,…For another thing,…”等的使用，讓文章條理清楚，邏輯嚴(yán)密。使用一些高級(jí)詞匯如“In contrast, can not help falling asleep，fail to spend time，show respecting for，tend to care more for… ，as often as possible.”等高級(jí)詞匯的運(yùn)用，使自己的文章更有文采。文中的從句及非謂語(yǔ)的用法如下：

復(fù)雜句：Busy as people are, the duty should not be ignored and every one should go back home to accompany their parents as often as possible.

定語(yǔ)從句：As is vividly shown in the picture, the department store which sells children’s nutritive products is being surrounded by crowds of parents

狀語(yǔ)從句：young couples fail to spend time with their old parents because they are too busy with their work.

倒裝句式：Busy as people are, the duty should not be ignored and every one should go back home to accompany their parents as often as possible.

非謂語(yǔ)作結(jié)果狀語(yǔ)：making the saleswoman very busy.

非謂語(yǔ)作定語(yǔ)：the neighboring department selling similar products of the old seems unpopular. 和There are several reasons accounting for it

非謂語(yǔ)作方式狀語(yǔ)：prepare their kids for a bright future by raising them healthily.

非謂語(yǔ)作主語(yǔ)： From where I stand, showing respecting for the old is a traditional virtue of china