16．假如你是李華，你的筆友Mike向你詢(xún)問(wèn)深圳錦繡中華的簡(jiǎn)要情況，現(xiàn)你給他回信，內(nèi)容包括：
[寫(xiě)作內(nèi)容]
地理位置廣東省深圳灣華僑城
占地面積約30萬(wàn)平方米
開(kāi)放時(shí)間9：00-18：00
旅游景點(diǎn)共分三大類(lèi)：
（1）古建筑類(lèi)：如萬(wàn)里長(zhǎng)城、故宮、圓明園；
（2）山水名勝類(lèi)：如漓江、西湖；
（3）民居民俗類(lèi)：如傣族村寨、侗族鼓樓等，它們都以著名的名勝古跡
為模型建造出來(lái)的．
現(xiàn)狀是世界上面積最大、內(nèi)容最豐富的實(shí)景微縮景區(qū)
參考詞匯：華僑城：Overseas Chinese Town          錦繡中華：Spendid China
分類(lèi)：categories                       故宮：Palace Museum
圓明園：Summer Palace                 山水名勝：natural landscapes
民居民俗：folk dwellings and customs     鼓樓：Drum Tower
實(shí)景微縮：imitated miniature
[寫(xiě)作要求]
1．需要含表格中的內(nèi)容，可以適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，但不要逐句翻譯；
2．開(kāi)頭與結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；
3．文章中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名及學(xué)校名稱(chēng)；
4．字?jǐn)?shù)：100詞左右．
[評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)]
句子結(jié)構(gòu)準(zhǔn)確，信息內(nèi)容完整，篇章結(jié)構(gòu)連貫．
Dear Mike，
It's my honor to introduce one of the most attractions in Shenzhen to you．                 ．
Yours，
Li Hua．

分析 本篇書(shū)面表達(dá)屬于圖表類(lèi)作文，根據(jù)提示信息現(xiàn)給他回信并介紹深圳錦繡中華的簡(jiǎn)要情況，寫(xiě)作時(shí)注意以下幾點(diǎn)：1、仔細(xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，明確幾個(gè)要點(diǎn)：分別從地理位置，占地面積，開(kāi)放時(shí)間，旅游景點(diǎn)和現(xiàn)狀幾個(gè)方面來(lái)介紹 2、圖表是文章的總體框架，要在圖表的范圍內(nèi)進(jìn)行分析、構(gòu)思和想象．要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語(yǔ)，按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來(lái)寫(xiě)．本文寫(xiě)作時(shí)可以按照要點(diǎn)所給的順序?qū)懀?、根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定句子的時(shí)態(tài)、語(yǔ)態(tài)；就本文而言應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)．4．注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點(diǎn)．
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達(dá)：an area of面積；is located in位于；places of interest名勝古跡；
Spendid China，covering an area of about 300，000 square metres，is located in Overseas Chinese Town by Shenzhen Bay，Guangdong Province．（高分句型）
It is known to the world as the largest and most abundant imitated miniature scenic spot．（高分句型）

解答 Dear Mike，
    It's my honor to introduce one of the most attractions in Shenzhen to you．Spendid China，covering an area of about 300，000 square metres，is located in Overseas Chinese Town by Shenzhen Bay，Guangdong Province．（高分句型）It opens at 9：00-18：00．The whole site of Spendid China is roughly classified to be three categories，namely，historic buildings，like the Great Wall，the Palace Museum and the Summer Palace； natural landscapes，such as Li River，West Lake； folk dwellings and customs，like Village of Tai People，Drum Tower of Dong People and so on．They are all modelled after the famous places of interest in China．It is known to the world as the largest and most abundant imitated miniature scenic spot．（高分句型）
                                                           Yours，
                                                           Li Hua

點(diǎn)評(píng) 英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作是一項(xiàng)主觀性較強(qiáng)的測(cè)試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫(xiě)作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫(xiě)作過(guò)程中綜合運(yùn)用語(yǔ)言的能力．在撰寫(xiě)時(shí)要注意主謂語(yǔ)一致，時(shí)態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語(yǔ)言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實(shí)的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識(shí)造出正確無(wú)誤的句子；二是寫(xiě)作知識(shí)和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫(xiě)作方面的基本方法和技巧．

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