Question

【題目】假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同學(xué)寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯(cuò)誤涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)（ ），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉。

修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：

1每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分。

Last week my parents and I took a two-day trip to Emei Mountain in Sichuan. Like everyone knows, it's famous mountain with all kind of plants and animals. The weather was fine. It was about noon when we arrived at the foot of the mountain. The three of them were very excited. As we climbed the mountain, we fed monkeys,visiting temples and told stories. On the way down I was busy taking pictures since the scenery was so beautiful. The time passes quickly．Evening came. We spent the night in a hotel in the top of the mountain. The food was expensive and the service was good. I was so tired that I fell asleep at the moment my head touched the pillow．

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【解析】【試題分析】

【1】two-days→two-day 考查形容詞。a two-day trip是復(fù)合名詞，用連字符連接的名詞應(yīng)該用單數(shù)。

【2】famous前面加a 考查冠詞的基本用法。mountain是可數(shù)名詞，這里是泛指，所以要加不定冠詞a。

【3】noon后面加when 考查連詞。It was almost noon 和 we arrived at the foot of the mountain都是簡單句，必須用復(fù)合連詞when把它們連接起來，構(gòu)成時(shí)間狀語從句。

【4】them→us 考查代詞的用法。作者和父母一起去旅游了，用“我們”。句意：我們?nèi)齻�(gè)都很興奮。

【5】visiting→visited 考查動(dòng)詞時(shí)態(tài)。三個(gè)并列的過去式動(dòng)詞fed , visited and told，故 visiting改為visited。

【6】picture→pictures 考查名詞的單復(fù)數(shù)。picture是可數(shù)名詞，從文中可知，作者拍了不止一張照片。故picture改為pictures。

【7】passes→passed 考查動(dòng)詞時(shí)態(tài)。作者旅游的時(shí)間發(fā)生在過去，故passes改為passed。

【8】and→but 考查連詞的用法。食物貴與服務(wù)好是轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系，不是并列關(guān)系。故把and改為but。

【9】very→so 考查固定句型。so...that...如此……以至于……。句意：我太累了以至于頭挨著枕頭就睡著了。

【10】刪去at the moment中的at 這里the moment引導(dǎo)時(shí)間狀語從句，意為“一……就”。故刪去at the moment中的at。