【寫作內(nèi)容】
你的筆友George 是英國某動物保護協(xié)會的成員,想了解2011年在上海舉辦的動物運動會的情況。請你根據(jù)下表,向他介紹該運動會的相關(guān)情況。
時間:2011年9月23日 地點:上海野生動物園 事件:2011年動物運動會拉開帷幕 具體報道:(1)30多種200余頭世界各地的動物參加田徑賽、球賽等項目 (2)觀眾席上座無虛席,運動會尤其受小朋友的歡迎 社會反響:一些動物保護組織表示抗議,認為此類運動會剝奪了動物的尊嚴,并對小朋友有不好的影響。 |
One possible version:
Dear George,
I ‘m glad to received your letter , in whichi you require some information about the Shanghai Animal Games .Here are some details about it .The Animal Games opened its curtain in the Shanghai Animal Park on September 23,2022. Over 200 animals of more than 30 species from all over the world took part in track and field and ball games .It was so popular with children that there were no vacan/ empty seats during the games .However, it also met with oppositon from animal –protection organizations .They believed such kinds of games took dignity away from animals and would have a negative infuluence on children .This is all I know about the animal games .I hope this can be of some help to you .
Yours,
WuJie
解析試題分析:本篇書面表達要求根據(jù)表格內(nèi)容介紹2011年在上海舉辦的動物運動會的情況,內(nèi)容包括時間,地點,事件,報道內(nèi)容和社會反響。報道過去的事情,要使用一般過去時態(tài)和第一人稱。因為是要求只能用5個句子表達全部內(nèi)容,所以在寫作時要盡量使用各種短語和包含信息量大的長句。比如定語從句,狀語從句,同位語等等。而且要注意保證句子結(jié)構(gòu)正確,要點信息全面。此外還要注意句子與句子之間的銜接,使內(nèi)容流暢,通順?梢允褂玫膮⒖荚~匯:海野生動物園 the Shanghai Animal Park 動物運動會 Animal Games田徑賽 track and field 尊嚴 dignity。
【亮點說明】本篇范文語言流暢自然,要點全面,用五個句子表達了所有要求內(nèi)容,很好得完成了寫作任務(wù)。在文中作者使用了多種句式結(jié)構(gòu),比如結(jié)果狀語從句It was so popular with children that there were no vacan/ empty seats during the games,賓語從句They believed such kinds of games took dignity away from animals and would have a negative infuluence on children,表語從句This is all I know about the animal games .I hope this can be of some help to you 。而且作者使用了have a negative infuluence on,be of some help to,等高級詞匯和短語,提高了作文檔次。
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