Question

5．My father and I stayed at the South Lake Hotel for a week when we visit Beijing last month．It is in the downtown area，but it is easy to go to anywhere from the hotel by public transport．
We lived in a comfortably doubleroom with a big bath．What I liked best were the free highspeed Internet connection in the room．I checked my email messages every day．I also shared for my friends many photos taking in Beijing．The food was wonderful with reasonable prices，and we enjoyed several local dish．
It is such great hotel that I would recommend it to any friend of me w ho is going to Beijing．

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分析 作者上個月和爸爸去北京旅行時住在南湖賓館，南湖賓館交通便利，條件舒適，所以作者推薦朋友去北京時就到南湖賓館住宿．

解答 My father and I stayed at the South Lake Hotel for a week when we visit Beijing last month．It is in the downtown area，but it is easy to go to anywhere from the hotel by public transport．
We lived in a comfortably doubleroom with a big bath．What I liked best were the free highspeed Internet connection in the room．I checked my email messages every day．I also shared for my friends many photos taking in Beijing．The food was wonderful with reasonable prices，and we enjoyed several local dish．
It is such∧great hotel that I would recommend it to any friend of me w ho is going to Beijing．
詳解：
1．visit改為visited；考查動詞的時態(tài)，根據(jù)時間狀語last month，可知是發(fā)生在過去的事情，故用一般過去時．
2．but改為and；考查連詞，這里表示并列關系，故用and．
3．去掉to；考查介詞，anywhere是副詞，前面不加介詞，去任何地方，直接用go anywhere．
4．comfortably改為comfortable；考查形容詞，此處用形容詞作定語修飾名詞doubleroom．
5．were改為was；考查主謂一致，從句What I liked best 作主語，謂語動詞用單數(shù)．
6．for改為with；考查介詞，share with是固定用法，意思是"與某人分享"．
7．taking改為taken；考查分詞作定語，相片"和"照"之間是被動關系，故用過去分詞作后置定語．
8．dish改為dishes；考查名詞單復數(shù)，dish作為"一道菜"講是可數(shù)名詞，前面有several，故用名詞復數(shù)．
9．such后面加a；考查冠詞，hotel是可數(shù)名詞單數(shù)，所以such后加 a．
10．me改為mine；考查物主代詞，any friend of后用名詞性物主代詞．

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