Question

前不久，你校舉行了一場以“My Dream”為主題的班會活動。請你根據(jù)以下所提供的信息寫一篇英語短文。

內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)：

? 1．簡述兩位同學(xué)的夢想及理由；

? 2．你的未來“夢想”是什么；

? 3．談?wù)勀愕南敕ā?/span>

注意：

? 1．詞數(shù)120左右；

? 2．可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，使行文連貫；

? 3．開頭部分已為你寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)。

 

My Dream

As is shown in the table, my classmates’ dreams vary considerably.

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Answer 1

【答案】

My dream

??? As is shown in the table, my classmate’s dream vary considerably. Li long, whose mother is a music teacher, has a gift for music and is fond of singing and dancing. As a devoted fan of Singer Song Zuying, she wants to be a singer when growing up. As for Wu Dong , he is not only strong but also good at sports. He likes playing basketball, running and so on. His dream is to become a national athlete.

??? Personally , I dream of becoming a doctor in the future. It’s a virtue to cure the wounded and rescue the dying. Doctors are always respected and admired by people. Furthermore, I’m good at biology , chemistry and so on ,which will lay a solid foundation for becoming a qualified doctor.

??? In my opinion, people may gain what they dream of after hard work.

【解析】

試題分析：本篇書面表達(dá)中心話題是我的夢想，此話題貼近生活，學(xué)生們有話可說，但是在寫作時一定要注意審題，不要跑題，要按要點(diǎn)提示去完成寫作任務(wù)，在理解my dream這句話的基礎(chǔ)上，提出自己對夢想的看法，以及如何去實現(xiàn)夢想。此外，在句型句式上要盡量有所變化，可以使用非謂語，倒裝句等，不要使句式過于單一。在語言表達(dá)上要適當(dāng)使用插入語，連接詞等以使上下文語義連貫流暢，同時也使文章有層次感，有條理性。

【亮點(diǎn)說明】范文中提到一些常見短語has a gift for有什么樣的天賦； is fond of 喜愛；As for 至于；It’s a virtue to do 做某事是一種美德； In my opinion在我看來。. Li long, whose mother is a music teacher, has a gift for music and is fond of singing and dancing.這個句子中whose引導(dǎo)非限制性定語從句。As for Wu Dong , he is not only strong but also good at sports這個句子中用到not only but also連接兩個并列表語。Furthermore, I’m good at biology , chemistry and so on ,which will lay a solid foundation for becoming a qualified doctor.這個句子中which引導(dǎo)非限制性定語從句，代指這件事。

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