Question

書面表達

高中學習生涯即將結束，你校高三年級擬舉行一次有關“感恩”的英文演講比賽。請根據(jù)以下要點寫一篇120詞左以的演講稿。

要點：

1．感恩對象；

2．為何感恩；

3．如何用實際行動表達自己的感恩之情。

注意：

1．只能選擇一個感恩的對象，如家人、老師、朋友等；

2．可對所給要點做適當發(fā)揮：

3．演講稿中不得提及考生所在學校及本人姓名；

4．開頭和結尾已經(jīng)寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)。

　　Good afternoon, everyone!It's a great honor to have the opportunity to be with you today．The topic of my speech is“Thank you, __________________”．

______________________________________________

Thank you for listening．

Answer 1

答案：
解析：

Possible Version 1 　　Good afternoon, everyone!It's a great honor to have the opportunity to be with you today．The topic of my speech is“Thank you, mum”． 　　Like many of you, my life has been blessed with a mother who is a source of unconditional love．My mum is an ordinary house-wife．I highly appreciate her kind consideration, especially during these stressful days．In these days, she keeps me company, cooks me tasty dinners, and makes my room as cozy as possible．On top of that, whenever I get upset, she listens to me and comforts me until I have cheered up．I'm fortunate to have such a caring mother． 　　Listen, time is clicking．The big exam is there for me and you, every son and daughtel, to realize dreams．I appeal to all of us here to work hard for our dear mums．I have another message for everyone here：Express your love in return．Either a small talk with mom or a cup of tea for her will shine her through． 　　Thank you for listening． 　　Possible Version 2 　　Good afternoon, everyone!It's a great honor to have the opportunity to be with you today．The topic of my speech is“Thank you, all my dear teachers”． 　　How time flies!The memory of the first day still stays fresh in my mind when we were packed with a lot of luggage and filled with curiosity about the life in Senior High School． 　　Thanks for all that you've done to us in these three years．It is you who open up our eyes and ignite our thirst for knowledge．When we are depressed by a difficult task or a conflict with our peers, it is you who come to us and guide us to be more open-minded．When we get bored with the tight schedule, it is your humor that fills our class with laughter． 　　In about one month we will head for our future college life．We will bear in mind your words of wisdom and be determined to be a role model and a positive influence like you． 　　Thank you for listening． 　　評分原則： 　　按參考答案給分，如果出現(xiàn)與參考答案不同，但符合題目要求的答案也可以接受，具體由閱卷點裁定。 　　一、評分原則 　　1．本題總分為25分，按5個檔次給分。 　　2．評分時，先根據(jù)文章的內容和語言初步確定其所屬檔次，然后以該檔次的要求來衡量，確定或調整檔次，最后給分。 　　3．詞數(shù)少于100和多于150的，從總分中減去2分。 　　4．評分時，應注意的主要內容為：內容要點、應用詞匯和語法結構的數(shù)量和準確性及上下文的連貫性。 　　5．拼寫與標點符號是語言準確性的一個方面。評分時，應視其對交際的影響程度予以考慮。英、美拼寫及詞匯用法均可接受。 　　6．如書寫較差，以至影響交際，將分數(shù)降低一個檔次。 　　二、內容要點 　　1．感恩的對象(只能選擇一個) 　　2．感恩的理由 　　3．如何用實際行動表達自己的感恩之情